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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "A Little Mixed Up"Variety of Old and fun Poems
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Comment from Vladilynn
Ohhhh...so delightful and very intertaining poem we got here, I missed a lot of your post. Write more poem...please so that i can catch up with you!! Love you!!
Take care and this is well written!!!
Love much
Lynn:0)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2010
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Ohhhh...so delightful and very intertaining poem we got here, I missed a lot of your post. Write more poem...please so that i can catch up with you!! Love you!!
Take care and this is well written!!!
Love much
Lynn:0)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2010
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thank you again for the wonderful compliment, and six stars, wow
Comment from ulster3
Dear wierdgrace.
I love this humerous/downright funny poem. We need a little levity as we get older. These rhyming quatrains are exceptional and I wish I was able to give a six. Thanks.
Fondly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2010
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Dear wierdgrace.
I love this humerous/downright funny poem. We need a little levity as we get older. These rhyming quatrains are exceptional and I wish I was able to give a six. Thanks.
Fondly, Rebecca
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2010
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thank you so somuch
Comment from Tellis
This is a terrific poem and I enjoyed reading it very much. It made me laugh out loud and I think it's wonderful
Tellis
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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This is a terrific poem and I enjoyed reading it very much. It made me laugh out loud and I think it's wonderful
Tellis
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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you are the best, thank you
Comment from jlsavell
wierdgrace, this is truly witty..at first I took it as very serious..such as one having alzheimers,,but I then realized it was written with humor..and making light of being forgetful as we age...yes yes,.I think I am there..jlsavell
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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wierdgrace, this is truly witty..at first I took it as very serious..such as one having alzheimers,,but I then realized it was written with humor..and making light of being forgetful as we age...yes yes,.I think I am there..jlsavell
Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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I am so glad you realized it was in humor, I was worried that someone would be taking it wrong, I love misscookie, and how she writes about childhood and tells us about her strokes and forgetfulnes, I love reading her writings, that is why I wrote, so she would see, we all have a bit us brain farts, to say, hahah
Comment from mjarabrab
Oh this is so bittersweet, and so smoothly written. I have only one suggestion, your line "Mixed up in the head" not sure why you capatilized Mixed, "my head" might make it more personal, as your poem is,
I enjoyed reading this, and I admire your humor to write about yourself (I'm fifty four, and have done a couple of things similiar to what you write!
take care
Mj
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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Oh this is so bittersweet, and so smoothly written. I have only one suggestion, your line "Mixed up in the head" not sure why you capatilized Mixed, "my head" might make it more personal, as your poem is,
I enjoyed reading this, and I admire your humor to write about yourself (I'm fifty four, and have done a couple of things similiar to what you write!
take care
Mj
Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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it did that automatic, i changed it, but I will go back and fix soon
Comment from Amfunny
Oh, this poem is just delightful, my friend. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. It brought a smile on my face as I recalled doing some of these things myself. Well done. :)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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Oh, this poem is just delightful, my friend. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. It brought a smile on my face as I recalled doing some of these things myself. Well done. :)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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so so glad it did thank you
Comment from Janelle
......and Mixed up in the head. - I think that the M in mixed should be lower case.
Loved this poem weirdgrace, it made me smile and also a bit worried. How did you get into my house, without me seeing, and even worse, why didn't I see you at the letterbox (Aussie for mailbox)! Here was I thinking that I was the only one that knew I did these things and you have been observing me all the time and now have written a poem about my befuddled ways! LOL!
Very clever and, obviously, I related all too well with the befuddlement you are describing. This is the first poem that I've reviewed for months (haven't visited fanstory for some time) and I'm so glad I saw it! Regards, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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......and Mixed up in the head. - I think that the M in mixed should be lower case.
Loved this poem weirdgrace, it made me smile and also a bit worried. How did you get into my house, without me seeing, and even worse, why didn't I see you at the letterbox (Aussie for mailbox)! Here was I thinking that I was the only one that knew I did these things and you have been observing me all the time and now have written a poem about my befuddled ways! LOL!
Very clever and, obviously, I related all too well with the befuddlement you are describing. This is the first poem that I've reviewed for months (haven't visited fanstory for some time) and I'm so glad I saw it! Regards, Jan
Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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fixed the m, thank you, this made me smile
Comment from RADIO
Very clever and an excellent ending
to those little moments of forgetting
as we grow older. Each stanza clearly
tells a truth as we pause in wonder,
what was I doing here? Actually dear poet
I care for a man in an advanced stage.
It's very sad. Enjoyed this excellent writing.
Radio
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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Very clever and an excellent ending
to those little moments of forgetting
as we grow older. Each stanza clearly
tells a truth as we pause in wonder,
what was I doing here? Actually dear poet
I care for a man in an advanced stage.
It's very sad. Enjoyed this excellent writing.
Radio
Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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I am so glad you read, and so am I , I forget so much daily, and I am sorry you are in the advance stage,
Comment from laren
Wow! This is a very nice poem which tell us about loosing our mind. We never know what will happened at the end of our lives but I wish I can keep de fine humor the author has.
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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Wow! This is a very nice poem which tell us about loosing our mind. We never know what will happened at the end of our lives but I wish I can keep de fine humor the author has.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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so so true, glad you saw the humor thank you
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from Ash Madox
This made me smile. I sometimes go to another room, can't remember what I needed, so have to return to where I started to recall my mission. I guess I should be worried? Luckily, I just laugh at myself for rushing around too much. This was entertaining and made me laugh as well. Cheers. Ash.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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This made me smile. I sometimes go to another room, can't remember what I needed, so have to return to where I started to recall my mission. I guess I should be worried? Luckily, I just laugh at myself for rushing around too much. This was entertaining and made me laugh as well. Cheers. Ash.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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glad you saw this, thank you
