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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Spring is gone"Variety of Old and fun Poems
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Comment from Readywriter52
The picture is interesting. It personifies spring. Spring is a time of rebirth and color. It's a time to enjoy the rebirth of the earth.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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The picture is interesting. It personifies spring. Spring is a time of rebirth and color. It's a time to enjoy the rebirth of the earth.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you I tried
Comment from ulster3
Hello wierdgrace.
This is a beautiful presentation of a lovely poem in an interesting combination of rhyming quatrains and couplets.
It tells the annual story with a fresh and wonderful approach. The best to you.
Fondly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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Hello wierdgrace.
This is a beautiful presentation of a lovely poem in an interesting combination of rhyming quatrains and couplets.
It tells the annual story with a fresh and wonderful approach. The best to you.
Fondly, Rebecca
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you
Comment from jlsavell
wierdgrace, I love it when you post poetry. You have created such a magical image of spring that you do make it hard to let go and watch it leave..ah but there is beauty in other seasons..it is just that spring is infused with such a harmony of color, songs and smells..well done..jlsavell
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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wierdgrace, I love it when you post poetry. You have created such a magical image of spring that you do make it hard to let go and watch it leave..ah but there is beauty in other seasons..it is just that spring is infused with such a harmony of color, songs and smells..well done..jlsavell
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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you ae so kind
Comment from EllieKaye
Hi Grace,
Yes, I did enjoy! Your poem is lovely, and it certainly describes spring well. Summer is here for sure....but it won't last. :) I hope you are well, it is good to 'see' you!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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Hi Grace,
Yes, I did enjoy! Your poem is lovely, and it certainly describes spring well. Summer is here for sure....but it won't last. :) I hope you are well, it is good to 'see' you!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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that is for sure
Comment from NadiaScrieva
I enjoyed this poem of changing seasons very much. Excellent job, and nice use of rhetorical questioning.
Good luck in the contest!
Best,
Nadia
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I enjoyed this poem of changing seasons very much. Excellent job, and nice use of rhetorical questioning.
Good luck in the contest!
Best,
Nadia
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you so much
Comment from missy98writer
wierdgrace,
your poem that tells a story is beautifully written. Lovely art work you used. Excellent imagery, great narrative, and very good descriptive writing. The lines that stood out for me:
Where is the robin and the meadowlark
That sing when yet the earth is dark?
Their defiant musical notes pouring
From the trees or the hilltops towering?
Where are the tiny creatures that fly
When the sunshine's on the rye?
And the butterflies that form a band
That fly along just out of reach of hand
No creature of spring is seen, no not one!
Alas, how sad that spring is gone!
And we mortals have to live and strive
Until spring-time greets us all alive
With the pep and joy!
I loved your nature story in poem form. This is a wonderful entry in the contest. Good luck. Thanks for sharing your poem. . .Melissa.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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wierdgrace,
your poem that tells a story is beautifully written. Lovely art work you used. Excellent imagery, great narrative, and very good descriptive writing. The lines that stood out for me:
Where is the robin and the meadowlark
That sing when yet the earth is dark?
Their defiant musical notes pouring
From the trees or the hilltops towering?
Where are the tiny creatures that fly
When the sunshine's on the rye?
And the butterflies that form a band
That fly along just out of reach of hand
No creature of spring is seen, no not one!
Alas, how sad that spring is gone!
And we mortals have to live and strive
Until spring-time greets us all alive
With the pep and joy!
I loved your nature story in poem form. This is a wonderful entry in the contest. Good luck. Thanks for sharing your poem. . .Melissa.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you so so much
Comment from gramalot8
Wierdgrace, this definitely paints a wonderful picture of springtime and how it soon fades away to the other seasons until windter is upon us. Good job.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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Wierdgrace, this definitely paints a wonderful picture of springtime and how it soon fades away to the other seasons until windter is upon us. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you I tried,
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very well written poem. I like the way it describes the scene. I like the birds and buterflied, but I am just not sure it tells a story.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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This is a very well written poem. I like the way it describes the scene. I like the birds and buterflied, but I am just not sure it tells a story.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you so so much, I tried, but you know me, in to science fiction more, oh well
Comment from misscookie
This is a very delightful poem. It is very reshing when I can read something light and resfreshing from you every now and then (smile)
this is a good write.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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This is a very delightful poem. It is very reshing when I can read something light and resfreshing from you every now and then (smile)
this is a good write.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you so much
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Your welcome.
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you are very welcome, have a safe hoilday
Comment from dmoncrief
I enjoyed this very much. I thought your imagery, phrasing, and choice of words was spot on. The poem flowed nicely. Nothing seemed. Very natural, as is the topic.
Denise
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I enjoyed this very much. I thought your imagery, phrasing, and choice of words was spot on. The poem flowed nicely. Nothing seemed. Very natural, as is the topic.
Denise
Comment Written 29-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I am so glad, I tried that
