A Titanic Tribute
the final reality122 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
This one had a lot of reviews. It is good however not one of my favorites of yours unless I missed something significant which is totally possible as I'm currently distracted ... ahemmm let me see ...ok cadence is good, words are quite visual flows well... you speak in riddles in this one...I do like it ... but think I will need to read a few more times to truly understand what you are saying here. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2010
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This one had a lot of reviews. It is good however not one of my favorites of yours unless I missed something significant which is totally possible as I'm currently distracted ... ahemmm let me see ...ok cadence is good, words are quite visual flows well... you speak in riddles in this one...I do like it ... but think I will need to read a few more times to truly understand what you are saying here. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 18-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2010
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When they start to criticize you, you know the relationship is over. LOL
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or else just excuses to stay around ... lmao xoxo Kiwi
Comment from midgev
Very well crafted and profound poem, much more visual than your "trash rap", which I enjoyed as well. Very stately words for a historical events, works well. I especially liked: "Feathers come to rest
Upon the silent floor." Very stark image. Great job, Midge
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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Very well crafted and profound poem, much more visual than your "trash rap", which I enjoyed as well. Very stately words for a historical events, works well. I especially liked: "Feathers come to rest
Upon the silent floor." Very stark image. Great job, Midge
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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Thank you so much, Midge.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'A Titanic Tribute' is a awesomely written tribute to those who face their fate without fear or trepidation. This extremely talented poet has with his sparcity of words, painted an excellent picture of all of our futures. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this quality.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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'A Titanic Tribute' is a awesomely written tribute to those who face their fate without fear or trepidation. This extremely talented poet has with his sparcity of words, painted an excellent picture of all of our futures. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this quality.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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So nice to hear from U again my lady. Thank U very much.
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victortouche,it's always a pleasure to read your work. I'm delighted to be back again. Take care.
With my kindest wishes, the Duchess
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I liked the metaphors and the descriptive words in this poem. In many ways, this was a matter of faith and love between the people in that boat. Very well written... Two thumbs up!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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I liked the metaphors and the descriptive words in this poem. In many ways, this was a matter of faith and love between the people in that boat. Very well written... Two thumbs up!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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Thank you.
Comment from luisestable
Yes, this reads like a tribute and the language makes this so clear that there is no mistaking what this poem is trying to do.
It is a simple language but it carries weight and convention. Good work shown here of you.
Luis
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Yes, this reads like a tribute and the language makes this so clear that there is no mistaking what this poem is trying to do.
It is a simple language but it carries weight and convention. Good work shown here of you.
Luis
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Very nice of U, Louis. Thank U.
Comment from fictionwriter
Funny how we think of the ship as a tried and true way to cross the ocean, but all of them can be sunk. A sad tribute to the amount of loss. WEll done.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Funny how we think of the ship as a tried and true way to cross the ocean, but all of them can be sunk. A sad tribute to the amount of loss. WEll done.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Thank U, my dear. I always appreciate it.
Comment from fairy77
Very well written I liked the way everyone was celebrating they're lives and no one was panicking.you used many metaphors and descriptive words which I liked.the way you described the boat and people and what was about to happen.as you put it to their new found freedom.very interesting,thanks.beth.some words were challenging but that's because I'm a beginner.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Very well written I liked the way everyone was celebrating they're lives and no one was panicking.you used many metaphors and descriptive words which I liked.the way you described the boat and people and what was about to happen.as you put it to their new found freedom.very interesting,thanks.beth.some words were challenging but that's because I'm a beginner.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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A charming review. I do thank U.
Comment from SamanthaD.
Excellent poem! The bpoem itself was easy to read and the rhyming was great, and yet it was haunting and poignant as well. Wonderful!
Blessings, Samantha
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Excellent poem! The bpoem itself was easy to read and the rhyming was great, and yet it was haunting and poignant as well. Wonderful!
Blessings, Samantha
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Thank U for a wonderful review.
Comment from LadyWave
I thought this was a very powerful and thought-provoking piece. I liked the metaphors you used. My favorite line was "we'll steep no waves tomorrow."
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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I thought this was a very powerful and thought-provoking piece. I liked the metaphors you used. My favorite line was "we'll steep no waves tomorrow."
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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That's funny, it was close to my favorite line as well. Thank U.
Comment from MikiB
Excellent writing on this poem about the Titanic. A horrible time for a lot of people. I hated it going down in the movie!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Excellent writing on this poem about the Titanic. A horrible time for a lot of people. I hated it going down in the movie!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2010
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Me too. And thank you Miki B.
