The Starting Point
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Comment from ulster3
Hello wierdgrace.
Identical sextuplets! Wow! I know that more is coming about these babies and I'm anxiously looking forward to reading the next chapter. I may have it in my box, because I'm a little behind as I told you. Thanks so much for this and all the entertaining reads you have provided me with.
Hugs. Rebecca
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2010
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Hello wierdgrace.
Identical sextuplets! Wow! I know that more is coming about these babies and I'm anxiously looking forward to reading the next chapter. I may have it in my box, because I'm a little behind as I told you. Thanks so much for this and all the entertaining reads you have provided me with.
Hugs. Rebecca
Comment Written 10-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2010
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can you amagine, thank you just wait for more to come, not babies
Comment from adewpearl
six percent babies - I think you mean six perfect babies
this is the first chapter I've read of this story but it sounds like a story filled with intrigue, Grace - part science fiction, part crime drama/thriller! Brooke
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2010
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six percent babies - I think you mean six perfect babies
this is the first chapter I've read of this story but it sounds like a story filled with intrigue, Grace - part science fiction, part crime drama/thriller! Brooke
Comment Written 09-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2010
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I know I will fix soon, can not right now
Comment from Deejharrington
A facinating story that is so very close to realtiy. You have a very unique writing style, it pulls the reader in. I assume you are continuing the story about the six boys' future. I will look forward to the rest of the story.
dj
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2010
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A facinating story that is so very close to realtiy. You have a very unique writing style, it pulls the reader in. I assume you are continuing the story about the six boys' future. I will look forward to the rest of the story.
dj
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2010
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good will be here soon
Comment from deepwater
The first baby boy made his appearance into the earth planet at 11:35, he was blonde and healthy, a beautiful boy. great writing again wierdgrace and the photo to go with
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2010
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The first baby boy made his appearance into the earth planet at 11:35, he was blonde and healthy, a beautiful boy. great writing again wierdgrace and the photo to go with
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2010
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thank you my friend
Comment from Ponder
Hi Wierd Grace,
Six babies, a bit of a surprise, again the only suggestion I have is to add a little detail to this, I also spotted this
The magnificent birth of six percent babies
'perfect' not 'percent' ?
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Hi Wierd Grace,
Six babies, a bit of a surprise, again the only suggestion I have is to add a little detail to this, I also spotted this
The magnificent birth of six percent babies
'perfect' not 'percent' ?
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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thank you I will fix
Comment from rmdelta
Grace,
very nice, crisp and straight to the heart chapter, my friend. Good imagery and dialogue highlight it for you. Nice work
Reggie
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Grace,
very nice, crisp and straight to the heart chapter, my friend. Good imagery and dialogue highlight it for you. Nice work
Reggie
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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thank you so much
Comment from daniela.albu
This is a very interesting SF chapter. It reveals a strange black market with newly born babies. It is frightening to even imagine such things happening, but often reality managed to beat the SF scenarios. The chapter managed to raise my curiosity of reading the next one. I wish you the best of luck with your writing.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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This is a very interesting SF chapter. It reveals a strange black market with newly born babies. It is frightening to even imagine such things happening, but often reality managed to beat the SF scenarios. The chapter managed to raise my curiosity of reading the next one. I wish you the best of luck with your writing.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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thank you so much hope you read more
Comment from Rafaqat Bano
hi
you are always good ...it is simple and as usuall interesting......i like very much it ...as there is a great suspense in it ...it may be the thruth and readers cannot help to be surprised to listen about the business of the new born babies ...anyhow it is good work ...thankyou for sharing it ....
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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hi
you are always good ...it is simple and as usuall interesting......i like very much it ...as there is a great suspense in it ...it may be the thruth and readers cannot help to be surprised to listen about the business of the new born babies ...anyhow it is good work ...thankyou for sharing it ....
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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thank you so much my friend
Comment from Readywriter52
She gave birth to twin boys. They are taken from her and sold to couples who want babies. The chapter talks about six children. Are they offspring of the man who got the girl pregnant?
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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She gave birth to twin boys. They are taken from her and sold to couples who want babies. The chapter talks about six children. Are they offspring of the man who got the girl pregnant?
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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six baby boys, identical, all from the alein, more to come soon my friend.
Comment from gramalot8
I was surprised to read that she had six babies. Must be really a tight group of creeps to not have this leak out. I feel sorry for the girl. Hope all the babies went to good homes. Am probably thinking they must be rich (hopefully good also) homes to pay what must have been charged for babies thru the black market. I know this is a work of fiction on your part, but isn't it sad to know that's it's probably a true story, also? Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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I was surprised to read that she had six babies. Must be really a tight group of creeps to not have this leak out. I feel sorry for the girl. Hope all the babies went to good homes. Am probably thinking they must be rich (hopefully good also) homes to pay what must have been charged for babies thru the black market. I know this is a work of fiction on your part, but isn't it sad to know that's it's probably a true story, also? Keep on writing.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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they are wait for more it gets better, well I hope you think so.
