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Comment from Nicki_Mist
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"no one would surrender tonight"
I really enjoyed that line very much. I'm sure someone was very disappointed. lol Good imagery and keep on writing like this.
Nicole

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
    lol thanx nicole :)
Comment from Pili Pubul
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You responded very well to the challenge, I love the imagery, very romantic and passionate even without surrender, LOL.

as waves of emotion
crashed on the shore
salty tears flowed
over bodies entangled

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
    thanx pili! :)
Comment from mmichelle97219
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:-) its the best kind of surrender if there has to be one. Good one shelley I am glad you liked the line just as much as I did.
Michelle

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thanx! :)
Comment from Sasha
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I enjoy these challenges very much. I am still trying to think of one for you but fortunately others are doing a pretty good job. I enjoyed this very much. Please, keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    lol thanx smurphette :)
Comment from learning_to_write
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I thought this poem had really good imagery, I could see that beach, and in the last line I could feel her fear.
Easy read, good flow.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you learning :)
Comment from Brantley88
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This reminded me of that famous scene from the movie, HERE TO ETERNITY, the imagery was that strong. Excellent application of the English Language.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    cool! thank you so much! :-)
Comment from RADIO
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Yes, go on, and she missed the
opportunity to go from here to
eternity as the scene played between
Deborah and burt. Yes, I remember,
he was 17 and she was 33. Yes, go on.
As always I enjoy your imaginative writing.
Radio

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    never saw that movie lol
Comment from Charlene0513
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To shelley kaye, Apoem addressing the errotic feelings that a couple have toether as they skirmish their bodies on the sands until they are pulled under.
Different yet tantilizing fervor.
Charlene

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    hehe thank you charlene :)
Comment from sugarfish
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I like this poem and think that you've done a good job in the challenge of creating something based on the one line given. Your image is strong and the words don't feel forced. Good job overall.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you sugar :)
Comment from Chuck23
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Your poem is a pleasure to read. It offered great flow, without the steady rhyme. Your words created a very romantic atmospher which I easily envisioned.

Thank you for sharing you poetry! Your very talented!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    and thank you for reading it! :-)