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keep your hope alive....

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Comment from El.Marjie
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Your response to Why Do I believe there is a heaven? doesn't really answer the question. Your thought is beautiful, and true, but should be a response to the question. If you are entering a contest you might want to look at this again. Best Blessings! Marjie

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
    thank you marjie :)
Comment from MikiB
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Very nice little poem written here for this writing prompt of why do you believe there's a heaven. The answer you gave is very correct!

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
    thank you miki :)