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31 total reviews
Comment from RenieReader
Excellent poetry, shel. I love the feel of the emotions as they swell from the poets heart and emotions to the pen and keyboard. You've expressed yourself well. Kudos in the contest.
Hugs,
Renie
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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Excellent poetry, shel. I love the feel of the emotions as they swell from the poets heart and emotions to the pen and keyboard. You've expressed yourself well. Kudos in the contest.
Hugs,
Renie
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thanx renie! :)
Comment from zoocq
Perfectly well done. Illustrates well the song of poets with words dancing in their heads and souls. Their words of emotion aching to be heard, read and absorbed,
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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Perfectly well done. Illustrates well the song of poets with words dancing in their heads and souls. Their words of emotion aching to be heard, read and absorbed,
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thanx zoo :)
Comment from BeautifulLie
This is good! So true. Explains how we work and how we feel =)Wonderful little poem here, best of luck in the competition. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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This is good! So true. Explains how we work and how we feel =)Wonderful little poem here, best of luck in the competition. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thank you lots! :)
Comment from knowledge
This is well written and meaningful Cinquain Poetry. Very descriptive of the drive of the creative poet writer.
You have my well wishes for the contest.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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This is well written and meaningful Cinquain Poetry. Very descriptive of the drive of the creative poet writer.
You have my well wishes for the contest.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 03-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
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thanx knowledge :)
Comment from mmichelle97219
she swims in the literati sea
hoping the words will her from downing
its a good entry, shelley. I thought it was very sweet.
michelle
PS challenge for shell use this as a repeating line: No one would surrender tonight
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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she swims in the literati sea
hoping the words will her from downing
its a good entry, shelley. I thought it was very sweet.
michelle
PS challenge for shell use this as a repeating line: No one would surrender tonight
Comment Written 02-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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ooh interesting line will start working on it :-)
Comment from Brantley88
You met the requirements of the contest in style. You just might have a winner here. The only question I have is; shouldn't the third line read; "words crash within 'her' heart"? Just a question...not a spag.
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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You met the requirements of the contest in style. You just might have a winner here. The only question I have is; shouldn't the third line read; "words crash within 'her' heart"? Just a question...not a spag.
Comment Written 31-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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no it's for both guys and gyrlz ;)
Comment from Pili Pubul
Sorry shelley that I was not in the computer due to health.
Will try to slowly answer all. I love your passionate cinquain, powerful emotions and good writing.
in silent waves ~
words crash within his heart
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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Sorry shelley that I was not in the computer due to health.
Will try to slowly answer all. I love your passionate cinquain, powerful emotions and good writing.
in silent waves ~
words crash within his heart
Comment Written 31-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thank you pili :)
Comment from Sasha
This is very, very nice. I enjoyed it very much and think it is a marvelous entry for this contest. I sincerely wish you all the best too. Keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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This is very, very nice. I enjoyed it very much and think it is a marvelous entry for this contest. I sincerely wish you all the best too. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 31-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thank you! :-D
Comment from Amicus
Hey Shelley...you nailed this one. Excellent imagery, smooth flow and smart sentiment.
Good luck in the competition...this is such a satisfying little poem, it is sure to be a contender.
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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Hey Shelley...you nailed this one. Excellent imagery, smooth flow and smart sentiment.
Good luck in the competition...this is such a satisfying little poem, it is sure to be a contender.
Comment Written 31-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thank you amicus! :)
Comment from AmorGentil
yes we write in silent, and we externalize our feeling and emotions, our creativity and inspirations in each verse, we looks for the right words to compel what we want to write.
Very good.
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reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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yes we write in silent, and we externalize our feeling and emotions, our creativity and inspirations in each verse, we looks for the right words to compel what we want to write.
Very good.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thank you amor :)
