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Comment from rama devi
HI SK---Very nice work. Potent imagery and theme. Well expressed with succinct cionquain style. I find no nits except I think the ~ signs are distracting---just my taste! Love the alliteration of W sounds. this sounds lovely read aloud.
It works!~ (there, I used one too)!!!~~~~~
Good luck.
Warmly, rd
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reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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HI SK---Very nice work. Potent imagery and theme. Well expressed with succinct cionquain style. I find no nits except I think the ~ signs are distracting---just my taste! Love the alliteration of W sounds. this sounds lovely read aloud.
It works!~ (there, I used one too)!!!~~~~~
Good luck.
Warmly, rd
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Comment Written 31-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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LOL! thanx rama! :)
