My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Calling my name"a collection of my poetry
5 total reviews
Comment from yellowrosebud
You scream,I scream we all scream for ice cream.I am always tempted by ice cream.It's not a favor I don't love.I love "Hear the faint cry from the freezer"Hear it all the time.LOL Well Done Good Luck!
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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You scream,I scream we all scream for ice cream.I am always tempted by ice cream.It's not a favor I don't love.I love "Hear the faint cry from the freezer"Hear it all the time.LOL Well Done Good Luck!
Comment Written 25-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my entry. I love ice cream that writing about it just seemed "write."
Comment from anne1204
Very cute poem, I loved the back and forth of the final decision to give in to temptation. I know the feeling. Good luck in the contest. And a great picture. Anne 1204
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Very cute poem, I loved the back and forth of the final decision to give in to temptation. I know the feeling. Good luck in the contest. And a great picture. Anne 1204
Comment Written 25-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my little tribute to ice cream. I don't think that ice cream ever goes bad in my freezer!
Comment from AlvinTEthington
Very amusing. There is something very addictive about sweets, not matter how unhealthy they are for us. You portray that well.
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Very amusing. There is something very addictive about sweets, not matter how unhealthy they are for us. You portray that well.
Comment Written 25-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my entry. I greatly appreciate your kind words.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
Open the door and there it waits
Waiting with tempting luciousness [[lusciousness]]
Waiting with sweet bursts of energy for my tongue
[ Good lines and the whole poem has strong poetic brilliance]
K
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Open the door and there it waits
Waiting with tempting luciousness [[lusciousness]]
Waiting with sweet bursts of energy for my tongue
[ Good lines and the whole poem has strong poetic brilliance]
K
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Thank you!! I wrote the poem "on the fly" and I suspected I had misspelled that word! I SO appreciate you reading and reviewing my short work, and your kind words.
Comment from Werdy_Nerd
Oh boy. I know that one all too well. Mind over matter is totally useless when the matter is an ice cream sundae. Or crisp French fries. Or chocolate. Or chocolate. Did I say chocolate?
Thanks for the great piece on this toxic source of temptation. I love the dedication, by the way. :P
Werdy
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Oh boy. I know that one all too well. Mind over matter is totally useless when the matter is an ice cream sundae. Or crisp French fries. Or chocolate. Or chocolate. Did I say chocolate?
Thanks for the great piece on this toxic source of temptation. I love the dedication, by the way. :P
Werdy
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 24-May-2010
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this little poem. Good luck with your chocolate addiction!
