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Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "simply because"keep your hope alive....
12 total reviews
Comment from Thilophian
It is a great work. I liked its philosophical content. But I have a doubt whether, "i" can be written in small when it is used as a pronoun. Please do tell me.. I speak English as a second language..
congratulations!!
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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It is a great work. I liked its philosophical content. But I have a doubt whether, "i" can be written in small when it is used as a pronoun. Please do tell me.. I speak English as a second language..
congratulations!!
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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i don't know but i also like to break the english rules sometimes too hehehehe ;-)
Comment from wierdgrace
simply said is trulyu right, well said, the picture is perfect, and a wonderful contest to enter, the image is strong in just the simple words, no errors and no revisions, I hope you got many vote.
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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simply said is trulyu right, well said, the picture is perfect, and a wonderful contest to enter, the image is strong in just the simple words, no errors and no revisions, I hope you got many vote.
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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me too LOL! thanx grace! :)
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you are welcome
Comment from jack silver
I enjoyed reading. Thought it was a simple idea but lovely. A simple idea is often the most effective. this one proved it. best wishes for you in the contest.
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reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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I enjoyed reading. Thought it was a simple idea but lovely. A simple idea is often the most effective. this one proved it. best wishes for you in the contest.
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Jack
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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thank you jack :)
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no probs
Comment from Alexander E Poet
I thought this was well done, I thought it was creative, I like the realism of your answer I thought it was imaginative easy to read and well done. No errors and no mistakes five stars Alexander
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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I thought this was well done, I thought it was creative, I like the realism of your answer I thought it was imaginative easy to read and well done. No errors and no mistakes five stars Alexander
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thank you alex :-)
Comment from amada
This is a poem very fit for the contest. Many things are said in here, mainly, our love for God and His love is forever overwhelming
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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This is a poem very fit for the contest. Many things are said in here, mainly, our love for God and His love is forever overwhelming
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thank you amada :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, a wonderful picture and a brilliant answer. this is a wonderful entry and i wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, a wonderful picture and a brilliant answer. this is a wonderful entry and i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thank you jax :)
Comment from rama devi
Love it, SK---I know who you are by your posting style. I forgive the use of punctuation in haiku as well. LOL
Excellent brevity and insight combined in this AHA for God.
Simple and profound.
love, rd
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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Love it, SK---I know who you are by your posting style. I forgive the use of punctuation in haiku as well. LOL
Excellent brevity and insight combined in this AHA for God.
Simple and profound.
love, rd
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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LOL! thanx rama! :)
Comment from MizKat
Your entry for the contst is short, sweet, and to the point. I like it in it's simplicity. I think it's a great contribution and wish you well with it. Kat
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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Your entry for the contst is short, sweet, and to the point. I like it in it's simplicity. I think it's a great contribution and wish you well with it. Kat
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thanks kat :)
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This senryu expresses in brief and simple form a valid answer to the question. "Love covers a multitude of sins." Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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This senryu expresses in brief and simple form a valid answer to the question. "Love covers a multitude of sins." Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thank you jeanie :)
Comment from thequillman
Well, you certainly summed that up in four words and five syllables. So true, Love is the answer and covers all. good job.
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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Well, you certainly summed that up in four words and five syllables. So true, Love is the answer and covers all. good job.
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thank you :)
