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Comment from gerry26
This is very good. The various emotions come thru to the reader. Your words are well chosen and this verse really hits the reader right in the heart. Well done.
gerry
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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This is very good. The various emotions come thru to the reader. Your words are well chosen and this verse really hits the reader right in the heart. Well done.
gerry
Comment Written 19-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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yur the best, and made my day, thank you so muhc
Comment from ButterflyHana
oh my! i have no words to express...yet i'll try,
the poem is so beautiful and i agree with its terms. it's all true...
i enjoyed the poem and you have painted the scene so perfectly. i loved these two lines...they are,
"I touched the sky with my fingertips today"
"I danced on a rainbow this evening and
Saw the smiles of dreams I once had"
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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oh my! i have no words to express...yet i'll try,
the poem is so beautiful and i agree with its terms. it's all true...
i enjoyed the poem and you have painted the scene so perfectly. i loved these two lines...they are,
"I touched the sky with my fingertips today"
"I danced on a rainbow this evening and
Saw the smiles of dreams I once had"
Comment Written 17-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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you made my days thank you soso much
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your welcome.
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your welcome.
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your welcome.
Comment from misscookie
I think this a very beauitful touching poem.
Your words are so heart earming that it warmed my heart and soul.
There is a m,essage within this write.
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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I think this a very beauitful touching poem.
Your words are so heart earming that it warmed my heart and soul.
There is a m,essage within this write.
Comment Written 17-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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this is true
havea nice day , just got in from dodtors had a cat. take care.
Comment from Readywriter52
The poem has a sense of sorrow about it. It speaks of unhappiness and weeping. It speaks of starting again, but continuing with the same old thing.
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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The poem has a sense of sorrow about it. It speaks of unhappiness and weeping. It speaks of starting again, but continuing with the same old thing.
Comment Written 17-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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it does, thank you
Comment from Dom G Robles
I like this poem. It is filled with melancholy. A writer trying to find solace from looking above the heavens and found neither the birds nor any being made her happy... Now again, she is filled with loneliness this time for not being a stranger but from the cold dark stares that burned through her head and steal her sunshine...I like the part where she says, "I danced on a rainbow this evening and saw the smiles of dreams I once had and will forever
keep..."
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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I like this poem. It is filled with melancholy. A writer trying to find solace from looking above the heavens and found neither the birds nor any being made her happy... Now again, she is filled with loneliness this time for not being a stranger but from the cold dark stares that burned through her head and steal her sunshine...I like the part where she says, "I danced on a rainbow this evening and saw the smiles of dreams I once had and will forever
keep..."
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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thank you so so much
Comment from missy98writer
Wierdgarce,
It's been a long time since I've read a poem from your pent. Beautifully written. I liked the title A New Chapter.Excellent imagery and great descriptive writing. I especially liked the stanza:
I danced on a rainbow this evening and
Saw the smiles of dreams I once had
And will forever keep, and I was filled
With the same refreshing feeling of diving
Into a cold, crisp lake, waiting for the
Chance to open my heart to the happiness
Of those around me, yet too broken.
Thanks for sharing your fantastic free verse poem. . .Melissa!
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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Wierdgarce,
It's been a long time since I've read a poem from your pent. Beautifully written. I liked the title A New Chapter.Excellent imagery and great descriptive writing. I especially liked the stanza:
I danced on a rainbow this evening and
Saw the smiles of dreams I once had
And will forever keep, and I was filled
With the same refreshing feeling of diving
Into a cold, crisp lake, waiting for the
Chance to open my heart to the happiness
Of those around me, yet too broken.
Thanks for sharing your fantastic free verse poem. . .Melissa!
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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thank you, thought I would throw a couple in, another coming soon
Comment from flutterby
Your poem seems to be reflective of your own life at present. It possesses a depth that comes from life
throwing curve balls, and women of grace finding a way
to deal with them.
And, it is so true that friends hold us up in trying times, and give us the chance to read those golden letters of memory that provide inner strength.
My posting ReCourse addresses some comparable issue.
flutterby
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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Your poem seems to be reflective of your own life at present. It possesses a depth that comes from life
throwing curve balls, and women of grace finding a way
to deal with them.
And, it is so true that friends hold us up in trying times, and give us the chance to read those golden letters of memory that provide inner strength.
My posting ReCourse addresses some comparable issue.
flutterby
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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thank you so much, I will read yours
Comment from adewpearl
I have not read poetry from you in quite a while, Grace - this is quite lovely. Wept for what I had and imagined what I might have - many of us have been in that place - this evocative poem will resonate with lots of readers. Brooke
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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I have not read poetry from you in quite a while, Grace - this is quite lovely. Wept for what I had and imagined what I might have - many of us have been in that place - this evocative poem will resonate with lots of readers. Brooke
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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been busy working on books, but thought I would through this in, thank you so much for reading
Comment from RebelRose
Very good free verse. Very thought provoking.
The rhythm and meter are smooth and the is good. You did a good job with this one.
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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Very good free verse. Very thought provoking.
The rhythm and meter are smooth and the is good. You did a good job with this one.
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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you are the best thank you
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I see that I left out a word in this review, LOL. I said "and the is good" I guess you can fill in the blank with whatever you choose, ha ha. It was a good poem.
Comment from menachem
Nice message, how sometimes the past can be a good friend for the present. Two things:
1. "A being, the honesty of a friend" is fairly misleading. As you go on you see it's the past, but then you need to read it all again to make sense of it.
2."Imagined what I may have", might make more sense as, "Imagined what could be", I think it has more of a flow.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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Nice message, how sometimes the past can be a good friend for the present. Two things:
1. "A being, the honesty of a friend" is fairly misleading. As you go on you see it's the past, but then you need to read it all again to make sense of it.
2."Imagined what I may have", might make more sense as, "Imagined what could be", I think it has more of a flow.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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this started free verse from my mind and heart, I will reread and see, thank you
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Sure. I don't think people often realize, that the freedom of free verse is its flow. That's what makes it different than prose.
