Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Connie P
Wow, this is an excellent poem. I had not heard the term "Cowboy Up" but you explain it so well, I'll have to add it to my vocabulary. It certainly sound more attractive than "Lawyer Up" LOL.
Great Job!!!!!
Connie
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Wow, this is an excellent poem. I had not heard the term "Cowboy Up" but you explain it so well, I'll have to add it to my vocabulary. It certainly sound more attractive than "Lawyer Up" LOL.
Great Job!!!!!
Connie
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you Connie
Comment from Amicus
I like this tribute poem to those who know and do the right thing, deepwater. Playing off the "Cowboy Up" idiom with a variety of defining characteristics of strong pragmatic men works well here. Original theme and clever presentation in smooth flowing rhymed and rhythmic verse.
Good poem.
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I like this tribute poem to those who know and do the right thing, deepwater. Playing off the "Cowboy Up" idiom with a variety of defining characteristics of strong pragmatic men works well here. Original theme and clever presentation in smooth flowing rhymed and rhythmic verse.
Good poem.
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from dportwood
deepwater,
Nice to see more of western poetry on this site. I appreciate your depiction of the cowboy and like the idea of keeping his image alive. Well done.
Duane
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deepwater,
Nice to see more of western poetry on this site. I appreciate your depiction of the cowboy and like the idea of keeping his image alive. Well done.
Duane
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you Duane , i can but try
Comment from Mastery
Hi, deepwater. Yes, these all sound like good ideas In your poem Especially this stanza:
""COWBOY UP"
It's what makes a cowboy tell it straight;
its being in pain, and calling your gate.
It's having nothing, yet having it all;
it's brushing off the dust and knowing how to fall"
Good job on this. Bob
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Hi, deepwater. Yes, these all sound like good ideas In your poem Especially this stanza:
""COWBOY UP"
It's what makes a cowboy tell it straight;
its being in pain, and calling your gate.
It's having nothing, yet having it all;
it's brushing off the dust and knowing how to fall"
Good job on this. Bob
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thanks Bob
Comment from RobertoK
Ah, this is a great effort. It makes you yearn for the cowboy life. The freedom, the beauty and smell of the horse. And of course the image of the main character. We all wanted to be cowboys when we were younger and still do, but are embarressed to admit it. This would make a great song, if you don't mind me saying so. The mixture of the old and modern Cowboy works perfectly.
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Ah, this is a great effort. It makes you yearn for the cowboy life. The freedom, the beauty and smell of the horse. And of course the image of the main character. We all wanted to be cowboys when we were younger and still do, but are embarressed to admit it. This would make a great song, if you don't mind me saying so. The mixture of the old and modern Cowboy works perfectly.
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you Rob i did not think about writing a song smiling
Comment from prodigal
Very nice definition, very nice delivery. I enjoyed this one. I like western poetry and enjoyed the mood of this one. Great job- sam
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Very nice definition, very nice delivery. I enjoyed this one. I like western poetry and enjoyed the mood of this one. Great job- sam
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you Sam
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Truly enjoyed this read. Great theme with good advise for all of us on how to live right. Nice rhythm and rhyme and the picture is very suitable for the piece. Good work. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
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Truly enjoyed this read. Great theme with good advise for all of us on how to live right. Nice rhythm and rhyme and the picture is very suitable for the piece. Good work. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from Judian James
This is wonderful. We've had our resident cowboy on the site in dportwood for quite awhile. It's nice to have another one "cowboy up". This was excellent and definitely can be interpretted and applied in anyone's life. excellent and welcome to FS!
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This is wonderful. We've had our resident cowboy on the site in dportwood for quite awhile. It's nice to have another one "cowboy up". This was excellent and definitely can be interpretted and applied in anyone's life. excellent and welcome to FS!
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Excellent piece of poetry. I know little of cowboys or the area since I'm an old bag living in the UK where we do not have such things. In any event, you really brought the whole scene to life with this lovely poetry. I can find no fault whatever and nothing to suggest changing.
Warm wishes
Kat
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Excellent piece of poetry. I know little of cowboys or the area since I'm an old bag living in the UK where we do not have such things. In any event, you really brought the whole scene to life with this lovely poetry. I can find no fault whatever and nothing to suggest changing.
Warm wishes
Kat
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thank you
Comment from patmedium
Yes, definately... well written. Teaches this Welsh small farmer's daughter about the great American life... I have enjoyed the way you dealt with this write, I like stuff that is laid out differently... catches the eye and also the imagination. Pat.
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Yes, definately... well written. Teaches this Welsh small farmer's daughter about the great American life... I have enjoyed the way you dealt with this write, I like stuff that is laid out differently... catches the eye and also the imagination. Pat.
Comment Written 01-May-2010
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thanks pat
