Comment from NadineM

Excellent

Pupa,
This writing is very expressive and intimate. Your honesty is deeply felt and the pain of bad moods and inner turmoil and sadness is strong throughout the entire write. Great color choices and presentation make this gloomy subject pleasurable to read. I think many hearts will be touched with this one!
One suggestion would be to consider changing how you sign the letter. Instead of "sincerely yours" which implies a satisfying connection/relationship, what about something a little more distant, such as "no longer in your power" or something similar?
Thanks for sharing this with me.

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010

Thanks Nadine, I appreciate your encouraging review.,You know, I thought of that (too nice) signiture too, the reason I kept is because this is how I sign every Chapter, I might be wrong to stick to it, let me think about it. I thank you for your suggestion and support dear friend.
Love
Pupa

Comment from neophysis86

Excellent

Pretty good.. I like how your work discusses the unpredictable nature of mood..Love the artwork and the text color which enhances the effect. Also like the end where you say, "You see, it is I who should always have power over you; from now on I will wear the crown.."

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010

Thank you so very much, your review is very encouraging and I appreciate it.
Love
Pupa