Comment from luna

Excellent

What a grand adventure, pix, I bet Joy had a great time - she loves Luna and the Dream Master. I had fun reading this and thank you for joining in the contest. My only question is - I can't tell from the last stanza - where are they going next?

Love,

Grammy *smile*

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2010

home! ;-)

Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

I thought this was fantastic, shelley. I think it is a step away from what we have come to expect, but it is so cool. Stretch those poetic muscles. :-)

happy writing
michelle

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2010

thankyahankya :)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello shelley,
this type of poem is perfect for you.

I knew you had a very vivid and happy imagination and it shows with this poem.

smiles
Gert

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2010

hehe thank !! :-)

reply by Gert sherwood on 20-Apr-2010

Take care.
Gert

Comment from Zolag

Excellent

There is nothing here that needs to be pointed out other than you still have your A game. great story and great flow good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2010

thank you zolag :-)