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Feelings of being an outcast3 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form, good flow to the storyline. i was interested by your choice of subject because we have the same problem. one house across the street from us changes boarders but they still get the same people visiting the neighborhood. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2010
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this is very well written with good form, good flow to the storyline. i was interested by your choice of subject because we have the same problem. one house across the street from us changes boarders but they still get the same people visiting the neighborhood. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 04-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2010
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Hi there Sweet! Thank you!! It sounds like a drug house. We had a trailer near us years ago like that. Cars would come, on a particular night, stay 2 or 3 minutes, and go...and just one after the other...please be careful, you never know...and thank you for this kind review too! I appreciate!! :)
Comment from MizKat
Feeling the way you do, I give you credit for having the energy to write this story. It is sad especially since it's lasted for several years. I'm so sorry that you have to go through this.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
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Feeling the way you do, I give you credit for having the energy to write this story. It is sad especially since it's lasted for several years. I'm so sorry that you have to go through this.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
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Hi there Miz! I barely have what it takes to get through each day, and it really is hurting me physically..Thank you for this kind review!!!
Comment from Mariea
Good morning, something of epic proportion must have occurred in your life in 2004. I would suggest that u break the story up into smaller paragraphs for easier reading. A good read without any clutter and just one 'spag'
Para starting 'Outside' - insert 'a' after 'on'
have a great day, regards Mia
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
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Good morning, something of epic proportion must have occurred in your life in 2004. I would suggest that u break the story up into smaller paragraphs for easier reading. A good read without any clutter and just one 'spag'
Para starting 'Outside' - insert 'a' after 'on'
have a great day, regards Mia
Comment Written 02-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2010
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Ok, I will do this! A heartfelt thank you for this kind help and wonderful review!! :)
