Comment from allie0925

Excellent

This is a great story of fantasy. I like how you intertwined poetry and the story together. Isn't it great to be able to have such a vivid imagination?

Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2010

allie,

I love when I'm able to ramble and twist and stretch life a little. Thank you so much...Smiles, CArol

Comment from Razz

Excellent

Very good. I liked this so very much.
It read so fast and smooth.
So very whimisical.
So fantastical...!!!
And it ended wonderfully.

Thank you for this.
Razz

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2010

Razz,

Appreciate the wonderful review and comments. Smiles, Carol