Those Flying Men
Admiring those flying men at the Olympic Games151 total reviews
Comment from LOA7
Delightful tribute. I haven't been watching the Olympics much, but did hear that there were a lot of gold medals given to the Americans last week. Glad your enjoying the games and all the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Delightful tribute. I haven't been watching the Olympics much, but did hear that there were a lot of gold medals given to the Americans last week. Glad your enjoying the games and all the best in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Loa7 for reading and reviewing this Olympic Games tribute.
Comment from Artasylum
lovely tribute and remind me never to try this particular trick. I would hate to do a belly flop in the snow... ouch... just thinking about the possibility...yours, diana
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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lovely tribute and remind me never to try this particular trick. I would hate to do a belly flop in the snow... ouch... just thinking about the possibility...yours, diana
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Diana for commenting in this work.
Comment from Amfunny
I am not a sports person by any means, but I do envy those who have such great talents to do such incredible things. This is very nicely done. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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I am not a sports person by any means, but I do envy those who have such great talents to do such incredible things. This is very nicely done. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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thank you Amfunny for commenting in this work.
Comment from tati
Dear author,
this is really an excellent read for this Friday morning. Your lines are beautifully written, wonderfully expressed. And the imagery is superb, particularly the 6th and 7th.
Arms emulating soaring wings
Poets of gravity
You have cleverly grabbed the reader's emotion and attention. Thank you for sharing; good luck in the voting booth. (tati, Feb. 26, 2010)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Dear author,
this is really an excellent read for this Friday morning. Your lines are beautifully written, wonderfully expressed. And the imagery is superb, particularly the 6th and 7th.
Arms emulating soaring wings
Poets of gravity
You have cleverly grabbed the reader's emotion and attention. Thank you for sharing; good luck in the voting booth. (tati, Feb. 26, 2010)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you tati for this great review.
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You're welcome, my friend. Have a nice evening.
tati
Comment from K. Suzanne
Wow, this is beautiful. I love the imagery you present, and the flow and rhythm of your piece. Plus, I just love the winter olympics. :)
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Wow, this is beautiful. I love the imagery you present, and the flow and rhythm of your piece. Plus, I just love the winter olympics. :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you K. Suzanne for liking the Winter Olympics and commenting in my wrok.
Comment from NightWriter
"Those Flying Men" is such a beautifully written poem! There is a nice rhythm to this and it's so graceful, just like the skiers. Like you said, they are poets of gravity!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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"Those Flying Men" is such a beautifully written poem! There is a nice rhythm to this and it's so graceful, just like the skiers. Like you said, they are poets of gravity!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you, NightWriter!
Comment from warbler
This is certainly a very timely subject for your poem. The photo is awesome. I enjoyed reading this rictameter and particularly liked, "poets of gravity". Well done!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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This is certainly a very timely subject for your poem. The photo is awesome. I enjoyed reading this rictameter and particularly liked, "poets of gravity". Well done!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you warbler for reading and liking this work.
Comment from Patricia Crandall
I relate to this poem as I am a skier (albeit downhill and X-C). This poem flows and draws on emotions - poets of gravity/white grace airborne - what vivid descriptions of skiers in the Olympics. It is one of my favorites. Good luck in the contest. Pat Crandall
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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I relate to this poem as I am a skier (albeit downhill and X-C). This poem flows and draws on emotions - poets of gravity/white grace airborne - what vivid descriptions of skiers in the Olympics. It is one of my favorites. Good luck in the contest. Pat Crandall
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you Pat. I also salute you for being a skier, my favorite sport at this point.
Comment from elainec4
Wow!
I thought this was an outstanding portrayal of what I've been watching faithfully!! You've captured the abstract and poetic nature of their extremely concrete challenges. Loved it. elaine
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Wow!
I thought this was an outstanding portrayal of what I've been watching faithfully!! You've captured the abstract and poetic nature of their extremely concrete challenges. Loved it. elaine
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Wow! Thank you elainec4. Your six stars really makes my day Thank you!
Comment from Oatmeal
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. Very enchanted atmosphere, judgmental, thought provoking, very enjoyable and thrilling.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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You did a wonderful job with this challenge. Very enchanted atmosphere, judgmental, thought provoking, very enjoyable and thrilling.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thank you Oatmeal for commenting in my work.
