Disgusting American Girl
A Sequel to Disgusting American Male28 total reviews
Comment from Razz
Another beauty!
A real winner.
Great writing.
One thing, however, Why is she not the Disgusting American Woman?....The male counterpart was not "boy."
Just trying to keep it equally disgusting.
Have a beautiful evening...sweet dreams
Razz
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Another beauty!
A real winner.
Great writing.
One thing, however, Why is she not the Disgusting American Woman?....The male counterpart was not "boy."
Just trying to keep it equally disgusting.
Have a beautiful evening...sweet dreams
Razz
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Have you tried to find a rhyme for "woman?" (LOL) Or female for that matter. I had to go with what worked in my limited vocabulary, and I apologize.
NOT! (lol)
Thanks razz!
Curt
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Curt,
This is great!
A sequel!
Great photo.
love the chorus.
love the rhymes.
It made me laugh.
What a good sense of humor you have.
Kathryn
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Curt,
This is great!
A sequel!
Great photo.
love the chorus.
love the rhymes.
It made me laugh.
What a good sense of humor you have.
Kathryn
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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We all need to have some fun, or what's life for?
Glad you enjoyed it my friend!
Curt
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Curt, you are so right. What is life without fun and laughter?
kathryn
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boredom and apathy?
Comment from Ann Smith
This definitely could be a country song and have a new dance made up to go with it too. I think you covered all the areas. Sometimes when some one gives you a challenge, it sparks all kinds of creative juices. The picture is perfect, poor soul. Funny! ann
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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This definitely could be a country song and have a new dance made up to go with it too. I think you covered all the areas. Sometimes when some one gives you a challenge, it sparks all kinds of creative juices. The picture is perfect, poor soul. Funny! ann
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thanks Ann!
I usually don't write on demand, but I do love a good challenge.
I hope it was a laugh for you.
Curt
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Yes, it was in country terms, a hoot. I think you should find a melody to fit. ann
Comment from Barthalamew
Fucking A radical! Bang-up job man, what can I say? I like the picture of your girlfriend(I might know her). Hard to tell with her lips in front of her face like that!Good one bro.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Fucking A radical! Bang-up job man, what can I say? I like the picture of your girlfriend(I might know her). Hard to tell with her lips in front of her face like that!Good one bro.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thanks buddy,
I thought you might get a kick outta that pic! I hope she finds somebody, quick!
Curt
Comment from jeslaf
It's sexual bias, I know, but the images in this one made me cringe! Yikes--but I gotta admit, a fantastic sequel to the hilarious first, in the same tone and meter. One nit:
and I gotta newsflash if [he] doesn't have cash
And OMG, that last 'if he's got him a shooter/ding a ling' stanza had me laughing out loud. The best stanza by far! :)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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It's sexual bias, I know, but the images in this one made me cringe! Yikes--but I gotta admit, a fantastic sequel to the hilarious first, in the same tone and meter. One nit:
and I gotta newsflash if [he] doesn't have cash
And OMG, that last 'if he's got him a shooter/ding a ling' stanza had me laughing out loud. The best stanza by far! :)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you!
I was hopping it was a good enough sequel, and thanks for the spag check, I never do find them all!
Curt
Comment from Kaiyah
LOL omg! this maybe just as good or even better than Disgusting american boy. i loved it! as always ...one question...
"and I gotta newsflash if doesn't have cash"
after the "if" is there supposed to be a "he" or is that just how it is supposed to be read???
wondeful and enlightening :)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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LOL omg! this maybe just as good or even better than Disgusting american boy. i loved it! as always ...one question...
"and I gotta newsflash if doesn't have cash"
after the "if" is there supposed to be a "he" or is that just how it is supposed to be read???
wondeful and enlightening :)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thanks Kaiyah!
There's supposed to be a "he", I gotta go fix that!
I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks again,
Curt
Comment from Sasha
I like this one just as much as the other. Thank you friend for encouraging you to pursue this. I laughed just as hard today as I did yesterday. You will never know how much I needed a good laugh. Thanks for coming through for me once again.
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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I like this one just as much as the other. Thank you friend for encouraging you to pursue this. I laughed just as hard today as I did yesterday. You will never know how much I needed a good laugh. Thanks for coming through for me once again.
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Anytime but tomorrow! I'm pooped!
Thanks for your comments my friend, I really do appreciate the thoughts.
Curt
Comment from Realist101
OMG!!!!! The picture ALONE!!!!!!!!!!! OMG...I am going to bust a gut. Whoever ask for this, sure got it, and then some!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA! yes, there's always two sides to every "story"!!!!!!! ONERY ONERY ONERY!!! BUT SO mcuh fun!!!! :) Susan
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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OMG!!!!! The picture ALONE!!!!!!!!!!! OMG...I am going to bust a gut. Whoever ask for this, sure got it, and then some!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA! yes, there's always two sides to every "story"!!!!!!! ONERY ONERY ONERY!!! BUT SO mcuh fun!!!! :) Susan
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thanks Susan!
I had to sit down and for a minute myself when I wrote the holster bit.
Thanks again!
Curt
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Glad to have a good laugh Curt, thanks again. I cannot get over that picture!!! If I ever begin to look that bad, I pray, well. never mind...:) S.
