Dear Painter
Gazing beyond the frame148 total reviews
Comment from Zoe Yates
Wow...more amazing than the rest. Really lovely.
The line I say is crooked
doesn't exist.
It's just a deviation
from my own within. ---you are blowing me away.
So happy to find a kindred poet... love what you do.
Zoe Yates---nothing to not like.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2010
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Wow...more amazing than the rest. Really lovely.
The line I say is crooked
doesn't exist.
It's just a deviation
from my own within. ---you are blowing me away.
So happy to find a kindred poet... love what you do.
Zoe Yates---nothing to not like.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2010
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Hi Zoe! Nice to meet you. Lover of words, just like I am. Your comments lift me away! Thank you to my world of writing!
Comment from Summer Falls
This was well done. So many times people do just as you at the art museum, trying to understand the message the painter was trying to get across. We look into the painter's mind and understand ... or misunderstand. Your poem tells of this. Excellent musings throughout.
Summer
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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This was well done. So many times people do just as you at the art museum, trying to understand the message the painter was trying to get across. We look into the painter's mind and understand ... or misunderstand. Your poem tells of this. Excellent musings throughout.
Summer
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you Summer for reading and reviewing this work.
Comment from Twomoon
This is incredible...well structured and full of movement, passion, and insight into an artist vision. You fully used your words to play to his art...just loved it very much, well done! Bravo, hugs, twomoon, good luck
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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This is incredible...well structured and full of movement, passion, and insight into an artist vision. You fully used your words to play to his art...just loved it very much, well done! Bravo, hugs, twomoon, good luck
Comment Written 21-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Hi Twomoom, what a great name! Thank you for making this day brighter with these awesome comments to my work.
Comment from Ann Smith
The meshing of art and poetry together fits like a hand and glove. This poem so aptly asks the question of the artist, and then the painting inspires not only the writer but the reader of the poem as well. I like the questioning and wondering about the painting. I'll still be thinking about this one later. Good luck with the contest. ann
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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The meshing of art and poetry together fits like a hand and glove. This poem so aptly asks the question of the artist, and then the painting inspires not only the writer but the reader of the poem as well. I like the questioning and wondering about the painting. I'll still be thinking about this one later. Good luck with the contest. ann
Comment Written 19-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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This is the best accomplishment. To induce someone's curiosity to think about something I wrote. What a gift!
Comment from rhymer1
Your poem, like Chagall's painting is off center, but i am confident that was your intension.
Louvre in (their) [his] lifetime. - Grammar error.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Your poem, like Chagall's painting is off center, but i am confident that was your intension.
Louvre in (their) [his] lifetime. - Grammar error.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you rhymer1 for reading and reviewint this work.
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Thank you rhymer1 for reading and reviewint this work.
Comment from hfriscia
I really like the poem...Very deep, your feelings of the art comes out in your poem...The flow of the work excellent, as well as the words you use...
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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I really like the poem...Very deep, your feelings of the art comes out in your poem...The flow of the work excellent, as well as the words you use...
Comment Written 19-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you hfriscia for the great review and comments.
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Thank you hfriscia for the great review and comments.
Comment from Carol D Parker
Beautiful writng and a beautiful poem.
It has everything, imagery, lovely words.
And excellent metaphors. The rhythm is
note worthy too. I enjoyed your notes too.
I never knew anything about Chagall. I
love the way you describe his work. Your
poem is like that; a dreamlike state.
Great job
Good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Beautiful writng and a beautiful poem.
It has everything, imagery, lovely words.
And excellent metaphors. The rhythm is
note worthy too. I enjoyed your notes too.
I never knew anything about Chagall. I
love the way you describe his work. Your
poem is like that; a dreamlike state.
Great job
Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Thank you deloralock!
Comment from Charlene0513
A contest entry that depicts a painter being loose with his easal and paints and decides to paint a portrait at arediculous angle to impress and give the interested parties something different not only to look at at but also to talk about for many a day.
charlene
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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A contest entry that depicts a painter being loose with his easal and paints and decides to paint a portrait at arediculous angle to impress and give the interested parties something different not only to look at at but also to talk about for many a day.
charlene
Comment Written 19-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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THank you Charlene. Your comments are inspiring and so truthful.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Now this is a very nice poem comparing an painter to a poet.
They both paint a picture so a viewer will see the beauty of both Arts Poetry and Painting a work of art)
Gert
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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Now this is a very nice poem comparing an painter to a poet.
They both paint a picture so a viewer will see the beauty of both Arts Poetry and Painting a work of art)
Gert
Comment Written 19-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2010
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That is a great point dear Gert! Thank you for commenting.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from MizKat
Your poem is nice and compliments the picture and vise versa. I think you did a fine job on this prompt and I wish you the best.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2010
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Your poem is nice and compliments the picture and vise versa. I think you did a fine job on this prompt and I wish you the best.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2010
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Thank you MizKat for reading, commenting, and the best wishes for this work.
