In the Heart of the Kiss
The thoughts a kiss might bring21 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a beautiful romantic poem, my friend. I haven't read your work before, but hope to read more. Congrats on your book.Quite an accomplishment~Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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This is a beautiful romantic poem, my friend. I haven't read your work before, but hope to read more. Congrats on your book.Quite an accomplishment~Debbie
Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2019
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Thank you Debbie for your very nice review and welcome to my world of poetry so to speak. Please take your time and read my work if you like. The poems in my book have been proofread and updated the ones here in my profile have not been updated except for just a few so you could see some Grammar or Punctuation issues, I need to take some time and redo them all. Once again thank you so much. I will check out your work as well, take care.
Larry
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well done. Your poem picks me up and takes me back immediately to my wonderful days with my husband. You certainly in a very prolific manner grasp the core of loving passion. I look forward to your book. I certainly enjoyed reading your portrayal of a kiss.
Sorry for my lateness in reviewing, but my computer died.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Well done. Your poem picks me up and takes me back immediately to my wonderful days with my husband. You certainly in a very prolific manner grasp the core of loving passion. I look forward to your book. I certainly enjoyed reading your portrayal of a kiss.
Sorry for my lateness in reviewing, but my computer died.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Thank you Raffaelina for your very nice review and your generous 6 stars that is very much appreciated. I am glad that it took you back. I will let you know when my book will be available. Take care.
Larry
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A very passionate write Larry and all this from just a kiss, I so enjoyed your words.
I have a couple of suggestions for you, for the sake of meter:
"The movement of his fingers, in places long touched"
Change to:
"The movement of fingers in places to touch"
"Longing for release, within their caress"
Change to:
"A long for release within their caress"
A joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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A very passionate write Larry and all this from just a kiss, I so enjoyed your words.
I have a couple of suggestions for you, for the sake of meter:
"The movement of his fingers, in places long touched"
Change to:
"The movement of fingers in places to touch"
"Longing for release, within their caress"
Change to:
"A long for release within their caress"
A joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Thanks Dolly for your very nice review. You have some nice suggestions however the poem was locked down to go into my book coming out soon. Had you got me about a couple of days or so ago I might have been able to change that. But thank you so much for the suggestions anyway. Take care.
Larry
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That?s a pity Larry, I wish you luck with your book, love Dolly x
Comment from shaffer40
You did bring it to life, this wonderful description of lovemaking, from the kiss and beyond. It isn't easy to depict the romantic experience, and you have done so in this poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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You did bring it to life, this wonderful description of lovemaking, from the kiss and beyond. It isn't easy to depict the romantic experience, and you have done so in this poem. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much shaffer40 for your nice review and generous 6 stars that is very much appreciated. Take Care.
Larry
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Larry. This work certainly fulfills all of the passions and emotions or romantic poetry. I enjoyed the read and look forward to seeing more of your work. Robert
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Hello Larry. This work certainly fulfills all of the passions and emotions or romantic poetry. I enjoyed the read and look forward to seeing more of your work. Robert
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much Robert for the nice review, much appreciated.
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You're welcome!
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Sometimes you just need that special someone with that powerful kiss to send you right over the edge, in a good way of course. You did a great job with this that left us longing for a kiss like this.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Sometimes you just need that special someone with that powerful kiss to send you right over the edge, in a good way of course. You did a great job with this that left us longing for a kiss like this.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Yes I know what you mean. Kissing can lead to many powerful romantic moments, I hope you have someone in your life that can give you the kiss you long for. Take care and have a great day.
Larry
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. Looking at the
couple one can see their love is true.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
You got this Matured mind thinking how it use to be ( mind you I said matured not old (Smile)
thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. Looking at the
couple one can see their love is true.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
You got this Matured mind thinking how it use to be ( mind you I said matured not old (Smile)
thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 24-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Thank you again misscookie, I am glad I got your mind to thinking back once again, never hurts to remember how it use to be. This poem and the other one you read are two of the many poems that will be in my book of romantic poetry coming out in the near future.
Please keep in touch if you like. I try not to limit myself to just Romantic I also do spiritual, friendships, weddings, anniversaries and so on. You take care and have a great day.
Larry
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Once again you are very welcome
Stay on praying ground.
Cookie
Comment from Patty Palmer
Your poem is quite good! From beginning to the end I enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm very much. Congratulations on the upcoming new book!
God bless!
"Keep right on writing!"
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Your poem is quite good! From beginning to the end I enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm very much. Congratulations on the upcoming new book!
God bless!
"Keep right on writing!"
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thanks Patty, your review is much appreciated, take care and have a great day.
Larry
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You're quite welcome!
Comment from Reese Turner
Wow! I'm 71, but suddenly I was in the back seat of a 67 Plymouth at a drive-in in Austin, Texas. Thanks for a most readable visit to a time warp long, long ago... Enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Wow! I'm 71, but suddenly I was in the back seat of a 67 Plymouth at a drive-in in Austin, Texas. Thanks for a most readable visit to a time warp long, long ago... Enjoyed it.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Nice Reese, Glad it brought back memories. It was an older poem I had written but it will be in my new book of romantic poetry coming out in about a week give or take if all goes right. I just revived another romantic poem a few moments ago which will also be in my book. Take care.
Larry
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This very well-written poem is not only sweet and romantic, but also red-hot! You have conveyed how powerful love--romantic and physical--is.
The artwork is very appealing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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This very well-written poem is not only sweet and romantic, but also red-hot! You have conveyed how powerful love--romantic and physical--is.
The artwork is very appealing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2019
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Thank you Janice for your very nice review, I am so glad you liked it. It is one of my poems that will be coming out in my romantic book of poetry, coming out soon. Take care.
Larry
