Do You Love Me?
Double edged Acrostic30 total reviews
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hello Helvi,
WOW! How clever. I had never seen a poem like this before. It must have been a very challenging write but you did a marvelous job with it. Congratulations.
Cheers, Whizpurr ^-^
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Hello Helvi,
WOW! How clever. I had never seen a poem like this before. It must have been a very challenging write but you did a marvelous job with it. Congratulations.
Cheers, Whizpurr ^-^
Comment Written 04-Feb-2010
Comment from Ann Smith
I am amazed at how you accomplished the feat of having an acrostic poem read the same on the right as it does on the left. I have trouble having it read just from left to right and make sense. I read today that acrostic poetry was a form used in Hebrew in the Bible. That is pretty cool. I read your bio and I hope things are going well with you now. Anxiety can be caused from many things. Your poem has a passion in it that only comes from the heart. Good luck with the contest. ann
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I am amazed at how you accomplished the feat of having an acrostic poem read the same on the right as it does on the left. I have trouble having it read just from left to right and make sense. I read today that acrostic poetry was a form used in Hebrew in the Bible. That is pretty cool. I read your bio and I hope things are going well with you now. Anxiety can be caused from many things. Your poem has a passion in it that only comes from the heart. Good luck with the contest. ann
Comment Written 03-Feb-2010
Comment from stephonavich
This is so amazingly creative! Great presentation with the formatting, words, the picture - everything! The first line coincides with the image and the eyes! Wow! The flow of the piece I adore. This is wonderful! Thank you for posting!
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This is so amazingly creative! Great presentation with the formatting, words, the picture - everything! The first line coincides with the image and the eyes! Wow! The flow of the piece I adore. This is wonderful! Thank you for posting!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2010
Comment from Authoroni
Helvi2: Just read your "Do You Love Me?" Double edged Acrostic for the Acrostic Poetry contest entry.
Wow, this `double edged thing is admirable. You've done a very good job and you deserve a 6 for your labors.
At a time when a regular acrostic seems so short and simple, I am impressed by the extra effort you've put into this.
Good job, well done!
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Helvi2: Just read your "Do You Love Me?" Double edged Acrostic for the Acrostic Poetry contest entry.
Wow, this `double edged thing is admirable. You've done a very good job and you deserve a 6 for your labors.
At a time when a regular acrostic seems so short and simple, I am impressed by the extra effort you've put into this.
Good job, well done!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2010
Comment from SamanthaD.
Very impressive! I love this! I've never even attempted an acrostic poem and you've written- very well- a double one! I'm very impressed. Well done!
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Very impressive! I love this! I've never even attempted an acrostic poem and you've written- very well- a double one! I'm very impressed. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2010
Comment from Angelite
this is very cleverly done. Well done you!
I enjoyed your double edged acrostic poem, it kept well to a storyline.
the setting out was easy going to read, i liked how you set both margins in this way.
I wish you all the best for the contest
Angel
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this is very cleverly done. Well done you!
I enjoyed your double edged acrostic poem, it kept well to a storyline.
the setting out was easy going to read, i liked how you set both margins in this way.
I wish you all the best for the contest
Angel
Comment Written 03-Feb-2010
Comment from Trybuck
So, why not make it difficult next time? :) Like having the answer on the other end... Kidding! I do good to write an acrostic that makes sense on one side..
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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So, why not make it difficult next time? :) Like having the answer on the other end... Kidding! I do good to write an acrostic that makes sense on one side..
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 03-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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Hi Buck, It's funny that you mention having the answer on the other side of the acrostic because I actually thought about it. LOL Maybe sometime I'll give it a try, though my brain may never recover. LOL Thanks for making me smile with your review. Loved your humor and the review! Hugs and Smiles, Helvi :o)
Comment from Curt Mongold
Wow, I give this a five on technical alone. If you could smooth it out, it would be a technical ten.
Awesome job, I never saw one before. I might have to look at that someday!
Again, fantastic construction of a double edged acrostic.
Sincerely,
Curt
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Wow, I give this a five on technical alone. If you could smooth it out, it would be a technical ten.
Awesome job, I never saw one before. I might have to look at that someday!
Again, fantastic construction of a double edged acrostic.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 03-Feb-2010
Comment from rhymer1
The time poets will spend creating such construction amaze me. but then, I spend hours fixing the meter deficiencies in my first drafts, so I amaze myself as well :<)
Slainte, rhymer1
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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The time poets will spend creating such construction amaze me. but then, I spend hours fixing the meter deficiencies in my first drafts, so I amaze myself as well :<)
Slainte, rhymer1
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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It's amazing what we will do to be creative.LOL When we write, no matter the style, we want it to be the best it can be. That's why you and everyone who cares about their writing will spend hours trying to get it just right. Thanks so much for the 5 star review. Hugs and Smiles, Helvi :o)
Comment from foxtale
a five for the technique alone!
But you also made a very good poem too.
Well done.
Except for rev
I don't know what that means?
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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a five for the technique alone!
But you also made a very good poem too.
Well done.
Except for rev
I don't know what that means?
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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Hi foxtale, "Rev" means to stimulate or get you motor running. You can use it to refer to emotions or when referring to a car or motorcycle engine. Hope that helps? Thanks for the kind words about my poem. Hugs and Smiles, Helvi :o)
