Do You Love Me?
Double edged Acrostic30 total reviews
Comment from poetbear
Creatively crafted and lovingly done so well.
This is a challenge that you met head on so beautifully.
Using all poetic licnse and devices so well.
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Creatively crafted and lovingly done so well.
This is a challenge that you met head on so beautifully.
Using all poetic licnse and devices so well.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
Comment from Gigi love byrd
you're truly talented your title caught my attention cause i jus love, love... but in short you captured the questions an feelins of many seekin the love treasure an the years past the first moments of butteries the constant need for proof that if it has changed is it for the better or for the worst
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you're truly talented your title caught my attention cause i jus love, love... but in short you captured the questions an feelins of many seekin the love treasure an the years past the first moments of butteries the constant need for proof that if it has changed is it for the better or for the worst
Comment Written 05-Nov-2010
Comment from G. Eleck
I think when you are in a relationship, at times you do ask these questions and have these thoughts.. Loved how the first letter in the poem was also the last.. Very well done
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I think when you are in a relationship, at times you do ask these questions and have these thoughts.. Loved how the first letter in the poem was also the last.. Very well done
Comment Written 22-Oct-2010
Comment from ladyscarlet
This is an amazing piece that I cant imagine being able to do myself! I applaud you and your ingeniousness. I thought the "drift .... far .... away." part was very clever. Awesome work!
God Bless,
~LadyScarlet
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This is an amazing piece that I cant imagine being able to do myself! I applaud you and your ingeniousness. I thought the "drift .... far .... away." part was very clever. Awesome work!
God Bless,
~LadyScarlet
Comment Written 05-May-2010
Comment from Pili Pubul
Six stars for originality, I enjoy the style and meaningful images and feelings. Thank you so much for sharing.
Move me ......................or shoo me...........as your personal................... claiM
End it, .........................................Or tenderly..........................................revivE
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Six stars for originality, I enjoy the style and meaningful images and feelings. Thank you so much for sharing.
Move me ......................or shoo me...........as your personal................... claiM
End it, .........................................Or tenderly..........................................revivE
Comment Written 06-Feb-2010
Comment from Brivaeh
What an interesting and creative idea. I have never seen this before. I were able to accomplish the acrostic piece while making it feel free verse, someting I think often matched the raw emotions of loves rejection. Good job, I really enjoyed this piece.
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What an interesting and creative idea. I have never seen this before. I were able to accomplish the acrostic piece while making it feel free verse, someting I think often matched the raw emotions of loves rejection. Good job, I really enjoyed this piece.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2010
Comment from missy98writer
Helvi2,
Your double acrostic is brilliantly written. I like how each line begins and ends with the same letter. I bet you win the acrostic contest, it gets my vote. Great art work and I like the way you formatted your acrostic. This is the first acrostic that I've read that is exceptional. I wish I had a six left to give your very creative acrostic poem.
Melissa.
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Helvi2,
Your double acrostic is brilliantly written. I like how each line begins and ends with the same letter. I bet you win the acrostic contest, it gets my vote. Great art work and I like the way you formatted your acrostic. This is the first acrostic that I've read that is exceptional. I wish I had a six left to give your very creative acrostic poem.
Melissa.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2010
Comment from Thesis
Great job on this, Helvi. I really liked how you wrote this to have the acrostic on both ends. Great job.
It makes sense, is moving and well done. - Thesis
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Great job on this, Helvi. I really liked how you wrote this to have the acrostic on both ends. Great job.
It makes sense, is moving and well done. - Thesis
Comment Written 04-Feb-2010
Comment from Realist101
Hi there! THIS is neat! VERY creative! I like this, it was hard for me to read the first time, but I re-read it and enjoyed it very much. Very original idea!! Good work!! Susan
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Hi there! THIS is neat! VERY creative! I like this, it was hard for me to read the first time, but I re-read it and enjoyed it very much. Very original idea!! Good work!! Susan
Comment Written 04-Feb-2010
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Helvi
A great acrostic poem
with a message and how clever you have
another acrostic that reads the same on the left as it does on the right.
Good luck in the contest
Gert
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Hello Helvi
A great acrostic poem
with a message and how clever you have
another acrostic that reads the same on the left as it does on the right.
Good luck in the contest
Gert
Comment Written 04-Feb-2010
