Sweet Caroline
Dearly departed Lady of the night15 total reviews
Comment from lola29
You are very good at rhyming, and given the circumstances of Caroline's notorious reputation, you offered a fine tribute to her.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2010
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You are very good at rhyming, and given the circumstances of Caroline's notorious reputation, you offered a fine tribute to her.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2010
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Thank you lola29. Glad you enjoyed this tribute to Sweet Caroline.
Comment from Dustman6180
I almost gave this four stars, because I wasn't sure about the word, randy. But I brought up dictionary.com and found that it is chiefly a Scottish word for sexually alluring. Now the poem made sense to me. Maybe you should add a note in the author's notes section. Nice entry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2010
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I almost gave this four stars, because I wasn't sure about the word, randy. But I brought up dictionary.com and found that it is chiefly a Scottish word for sexually alluring. Now the poem made sense to me. Maybe you should add a note in the author's notes section. Nice entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2010
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Thanks for the reminder, Dustman6180. I'll add that comment in my Author Notes section. The word randy is used more in european circles in place of the word "horny" that we commonly use here in the States. Thanks for taking the time to look up randy in the dictionary. You now know a new word!
Comment from SamanthaD.
Excellent! I liked the poem BEFORE I read your notes but after reading your notes- I LOVE your poem! It makes me laugh. Excellent work. I think you captured the picture perfectly and I love the "diabetic" reference in your notes- it just ties everything together!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2010
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Excellent! I liked the poem BEFORE I read your notes but after reading your notes- I LOVE your poem! It makes me laugh. Excellent work. I think you captured the picture perfectly and I love the "diabetic" reference in your notes- it just ties everything together!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2010
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Thank you for the enthusiastic comments, and five star rating SamanthaD. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Amicus
Your clever little epitaph is brief, rhymes, and evokes a smile. I guess one could call it a sweet reminder of dear departed Carolyn Candy. Nice job.
Good luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2010
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Your clever little epitaph is brief, rhymes, and evokes a smile. I guess one could call it a sweet reminder of dear departed Carolyn Candy. Nice job.
Good luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2010
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Thank you, Amicus. Glad I got you to smile. That's the main goal here. Thanks too for the fine rating and encouraging comments.
Comment from Peeping_Soul
well till now i have not seen any work about a prostite and i like the way you painyt her anduse abeautiful picture.great write from youtu
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well till now i have not seen any work about a prostite and i like the way you painyt her anduse abeautiful picture.great write from youtu
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2010
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Thank you Peeping_Soul. I don't know what made me come up with this one (prostitutes are not my usual charactrers), but it fell out my head so I went with it. Finding the perfect picture was just a bonus!
