Tantalizing Eyes
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Comment from eliz100
This is another well-written chapter, of course. Something had to be done about Peggy. This chapter was interesting from beginning to end. I look forward to the next installment.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2010
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This is another well-written chapter, of course. Something had to be done about Peggy. This chapter was interesting from beginning to end. I look forward to the next installment.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2010
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Charlene0513
To barbara.wilkey,
A continuation of the story where a decision is made among the men and Peggy as to whether to continue with the mission at hand when Leya was still fairly weak.
The voting didn't take long and the men were in it for the long haul with Leya. While Peggy was told to leave by Matt.
Charlene
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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To barbara.wilkey,
A continuation of the story where a decision is made among the men and Peggy as to whether to continue with the mission at hand when Leya was still fairly weak.
The voting didn't take long and the men were in it for the long haul with Leya. While Peggy was told to leave by Matt.
Charlene
Comment Written 25-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from thewriterwithinme
Ii really enjoyed reading this lovely chapter of this story. I can't wait for the next chapter! You must post more, and PLEASE keep on writing--
thewriterwithinme
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Ii really enjoyed reading this lovely chapter of this story. I can't wait for the next chapter! You must post more, and PLEASE keep on writing--
thewriterwithinme
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from jayesnb
This was another well written chapter... I spotted no errors and my attention was held throughout....Peggy acted exactly how i thought she would've...great job
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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This was another well written chapter... I spotted no errors and my attention was held throughout....Peggy acted exactly how i thought she would've...great job
Comment Written 25-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Heidixoxo
WOW Barbara, another amazing story you have shared with all of us. This is a great story full of interesting parts in my eyes. Job well done my friend and I wish you only the best. Thank you for sharing........xoxo
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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WOW Barbara, another amazing story you have shared with all of us. This is a great story full of interesting parts in my eyes. Job well done my friend and I wish you only the best. Thank you for sharing........xoxo
Comment Written 25-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I like this chapter . The birds of different feathers who have found themselves together are finding more harmony and happiness with each other. kudos
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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I like this chapter . The birds of different feathers who have found themselves together are finding more harmony and happiness with each other. kudos
Comment Written 25-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from F Oktoprimasakti
Hi, this is my first time reading your story. I found it very interesting, I can't wait to read what Steven brings for Leya to wear. It's a very enjoyable story to read, the flow of the story and the langauge you use are easy enough for me to understand. Some other writers would use advanced vocabulary (big words)in the story that makes me feel like reading a text book instead of an enjoyable fiction:). Thank you :).
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Hi, this is my first time reading your story. I found it very interesting, I can't wait to read what Steven brings for Leya to wear. It's a very enjoyable story to read, the flow of the story and the langauge you use are easy enough for me to understand. Some other writers would use advanced vocabulary (big words)in the story that makes me feel like reading a text book instead of an enjoyable fiction:). Thank you :).
Comment Written 25-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Thank you. I believe when a $.05 word works why use a $.25 word. Of course I teach first graders all day.
Comment from ZigzagMLT
Well done. Congrats for the recognition. I like this story, and having to wait for the chapters works for me. I understand the outside paying gig.
A couple of things I found: my career would be ruined.
you've done it now.
and someone from outside of the team.
Thanks!
Zigzagmlt
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Well done. Congrats for the recognition. I like this story, and having to wait for the chapters works for me. I understand the outside paying gig.
A couple of things I found: my career would be ruined.
you've done it now.
and someone from outside of the team.
Thanks!
Zigzagmlt
Comment Written 24-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Thank you for your review. I will recheck those areas.
Comment from CKLA
Another great chapter. I have just started reading your story and am enjoying it very much. I look forward to reading the next addition.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Another great chapter. I have just started reading your story and am enjoying it very much. I look forward to reading the next addition.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from L.lora
An excellent edition. The narratives
are superb and the dialogues blend
and fit nicely. I sure hope you are
going to let us know how the information
is being leaked although we all probably
have come to a conclusion about Peggy even
if it turns out to be wrong. I await anxiously
for your next post. no nits or spags. Lora
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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An excellent edition. The narratives
are superb and the dialogues blend
and fit nicely. I sure hope you are
going to let us know how the information
is being leaked although we all probably
have come to a conclusion about Peggy even
if it turns out to be wrong. I await anxiously
for your next post. no nits or spags. Lora
Comment Written 24-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2010
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Thank you for your kind words.
