The Lost Boy
No Way Home44 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
I came back to read this poem you posted -- seven years ago. I find it important to read to get the full meaning of the sequel. This is a different spin that I had given the Part 2 version and it defines the speakers mindset for clearly. This poem seems to end with a death, though the current one may be a haunted spirit. I see here the graphic sex and violence leading to a heroin addiction and an eventual death. Powerful and ugly look at what is probably a real existence somewhere.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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I came back to read this poem you posted -- seven years ago. I find it important to read to get the full meaning of the sequel. This is a different spin that I had given the Part 2 version and it defines the speakers mindset for clearly. This poem seems to end with a death, though the current one may be a haunted spirit. I see here the graphic sex and violence leading to a heroin addiction and an eventual death. Powerful and ugly look at what is probably a real existence somewhere.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Thank you Bill, you are spot on.
Curt
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Most interesting, gut-wrenching poem. I think the 'subject' does, indeed, want to talk about it- perhaps in metaphors, as this is the only way to perfectly describe the pain and guilt. The subject here, I believe to be a homosexual who desires to, but cannot 'come out', cannot bear the (needless) guilt, and is sadly addicted to heroin. Great write! Thank you for sharing. Betty
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Most interesting, gut-wrenching poem. I think the 'subject' does, indeed, want to talk about it- perhaps in metaphors, as this is the only way to perfectly describe the pain and guilt. The subject here, I believe to be a homosexual who desires to, but cannot 'come out', cannot bear the (needless) guilt, and is sadly addicted to heroin. Great write! Thank you for sharing. Betty
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thanks Betty,
I do thank you fro your thoughts. The subject, I do believe, is not homosexual, but is so strung out on heroin that his self esteem is completely gone, and therefore, is willing to do anything to get his fix. The guilt for feeling this way, and the resulting shame of debasing himself so, causes him to "accidentally" overdose.
Many addicts I have known have spoken of this shame and low self esteem in their lives, and the power of the addiction that so completely dominates them that they are powerless to stop.
Thank you again,
Curt
Comment from Neelam Sangwai
Curt, your photographic style one again shining through words.
I really dont have words for the review.But short reviews are not accepted. so......!!!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2013
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Curt, your photographic style one again shining through words.
I really dont have words for the review.But short reviews are not accepted. so......!!!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2013
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The fact that you read something from my portfolio for 2 lousy cents, AND give it six stars, is all the review I could ever want my friend. Truly you honor me more than I can say.
Curt
Comment from NadineM
Wow. Again this is so deserving of the highest rating as your writing is compelling, well-written and intense. The passion is felt throughout. The pain and desire to lose feeling is just incredible. What a sad story of too many lives lived. Difference is, this life is being written about, shared and maybe some of that sharing will help purge the poison.
Looking at the date this was written, I am embarassed to say I'd missed it. Please accept my apology now, and will set this right by becoming a fan.
So much going on at this end, cannot promise I'll properly catch up, however I feel blessed just reading what I can of your work.
Your word choices and deep emotional expression really pull the reader in and I was feeling some of your pain as I read. Powerful writing! Congratulations on the contest win. So deserving.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Wow. Again this is so deserving of the highest rating as your writing is compelling, well-written and intense. The passion is felt throughout. The pain and desire to lose feeling is just incredible. What a sad story of too many lives lived. Difference is, this life is being written about, shared and maybe some of that sharing will help purge the poison.
Looking at the date this was written, I am embarassed to say I'd missed it. Please accept my apology now, and will set this right by becoming a fan.
So much going on at this end, cannot promise I'll properly catch up, however I feel blessed just reading what I can of your work.
Your word choices and deep emotional expression really pull the reader in and I was feeling some of your pain as I read. Powerful writing! Congratulations on the contest win. So deserving.
Thanks for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much for your heartfelt comments on this piece and for your kindest of ratings as well.
I am honored.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from evolove
no wonder why this poem won,,, captivating and the powerful words, more poems please for this poet.(to mark the passing of a fool- mark the title itself, very nice
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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no wonder why this poem won,,, captivating and the powerful words, more poems please for this poet.(to mark the passing of a fool- mark the title itself, very nice
Comment Written 17-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2011
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Thank you.
C
Comment from AnetteAurora
Wauu that is so very well written and especially I really like the very end of it:
The filthy floor is soothing cool,
in twitching time there forms a pool
of blackened blood and foamy drool-
to mark the passing of a fool.
The last line is really a perfect last line since you draw the attention to the "fool"
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2010
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Wauu that is so very well written and especially I really like the very end of it:
The filthy floor is soothing cool,
in twitching time there forms a pool
of blackened blood and foamy drool-
to mark the passing of a fool.
The last line is really a perfect last line since you draw the attention to the "fool"
Comment Written 25-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2010
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Thank you Anette,
I truly appreciate your comments.
Curt
Comment from hotstuff
A very disturbing poem that made me cringe as I read it. But I can understand why you won the competition with this poem. It is excellently written and is very descriptive.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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A very disturbing poem that made me cringe as I read it. But I can understand why you won the competition with this poem. It is excellently written and is very descriptive.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2010
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Thank you, for all those remembered and those still living.
Curt
Comment from Abba Lin
Hi Curt, congratulations.. on this remarkable poem.. I say remarkable because of your writing.. It is splendid..The content is heartwrenching and sad to say true..My nature is to protect the children..I can't say what I would like to do with the predators..They might have to kick me out if I did..But let me start with a knife..I better quit.. but I will say that would be just a start... Love Lin
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Hi Curt, congratulations.. on this remarkable poem.. I say remarkable because of your writing.. It is splendid..The content is heartwrenching and sad to say true..My nature is to protect the children..I can't say what I would like to do with the predators..They might have to kick me out if I did..But let me start with a knife..I better quit.. but I will say that would be just a start... Love Lin
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you Lin, for all the survivors and for those we remember with the sadness of a life cut too short.
Blessings to you and to yours,
Curt
Comment from Annelisa
Congratulations on winning first place. You deserve it. The imagery is vivid. The feeling of despair or being disconnected from all other emotion is strong. I think the monorhyme format was an excellent choice.
Annelisa
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Congratulations on winning first place. You deserve it. The imagery is vivid. The feeling of despair or being disconnected from all other emotion is strong. I think the monorhyme format was an excellent choice.
Annelisa
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Annelisa,
for those still living and for those remembered, I sincerely thank you.
Curt
Comment from Adri7enne
Congratulations, Curt. Well-deserved win for poem of the month. You paint a stark picture of addiction. Dark, with deep hints of despair and self-loathing. What a horrible dance to get caught up in.
Your rhymes and rhythm are impeccable. You make it look easy. That takes big talent. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Congratulations, Curt. Well-deserved win for poem of the month. You paint a stark picture of addiction. Dark, with deep hints of despair and self-loathing. What a horrible dance to get caught up in.
Your rhymes and rhythm are impeccable. You make it look easy. That takes big talent. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you so much for your thoughts on this work. It was a tough write, but then again, all of the darker works that I rip from my soul are.
Your thoughts are always welcome here my friend,
Curt
