Anxious and Me
Just a little ditty in motion.35 total reviews
Comment from pcimei
I love the child like spirit in your writing. I sense the longing of child's freedom to explore. I invisioned a child climbing a tree and letting his imagination run free and wild. I wanted to call you up and "Go with you." Great job.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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I love the child like spirit in your writing. I sense the longing of child's freedom to explore. I invisioned a child climbing a tree and letting his imagination run free and wild. I wanted to call you up and "Go with you." Great job.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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Very nice commentary. Thank You.
Comment from Trybuck
I liked the art work used for this one very much, I think the rainbow is perfect with what you've written.
Somewhere over the rainbow we'll find what we don't know.
Good one, Buck
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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I liked the art work used for this one very much, I think the rainbow is perfect with what you've written.
Somewhere over the rainbow we'll find what we don't know.
Good one, Buck
Comment Written 28-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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Thank U sir. Isn't it refreshing to read a non-soul-searcher once in a while?
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I read them all the time.
Comment from ZeBestBlonde1
victortouche,
hello to you. Ha! your title is GREAT and your little jiggy is very fun as well. Great choice of words for each little verse.
Is there a repeating verse? Or is this one of those that just keeps going along with new words-those are good ones also?
Either way, I enjoyed it very much.
Thanks for posting
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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victortouche,
hello to you. Ha! your title is GREAT and your little jiggy is very fun as well. Great choice of words for each little verse.
Is there a repeating verse? Or is this one of those that just keeps going along with new words-those are good ones also?
Either way, I enjoyed it very much.
Thanks for posting
Comment Written 28-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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Are U stirring my embers? Thank U.
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victortouche...ha ha! Now that is a new one I've not heard before. I simply call it like I see it-glad you enjoyed!
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It was a little more tongue and cheek than U think. Look at my portfolio. Loooook at myyyyy portfooooolio, says Dracula.
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Ausso...said Dracula to ze fair innocent damsel
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Innocent?
Comment from AlvinTEthington
There's a very good rhythm to the work. I wouldn't call it a cadence, for it is a bit more free flowing. But it definitely stays with the hearer. The music to the work is good. The rhyme works well to make the hearer remember the work. Definitely whimsical.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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There's a very good rhythm to the work. I wouldn't call it a cadence, for it is a bit more free flowing. But it definitely stays with the hearer. The music to the work is good. The rhyme works well to make the hearer remember the work. Definitely whimsical.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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I'm glad U can appreciate a little ditty now and then. Thank U much.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Charlene0513
To victortouche,
A poem depicting the days hencefoth as we enter into a New Year all very anxious to learn and know what the future lies in store.
Charlene
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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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To victortouche,
A poem depicting the days hencefoth as we enter into a New Year all very anxious to learn and know what the future lies in store.
Charlene
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2009
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I guess it was probably a good time for this one. Thanks.
