Anxious and Me
Just a little ditty in motion.35 total reviews
Comment from Earthlover
A cute little ditty! You are quiet witty! Seriously though, I really like your style. It's unique and fun to read. The picture illustration captures the emotion of your words.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing!
Sincerely,
Earthlover
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2009
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A cute little ditty! You are quiet witty! Seriously though, I really like your style. It's unique and fun to read. The picture illustration captures the emotion of your words.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for sharing!
Sincerely,
Earthlover
Comment Written 31-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2009
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A very nice review. Thank you.
Comment from PoetSpirit
I have to agree with you victortouche that this poem is truly whimsical. Very nicely worded and presented, you did a great job. I truly enjoyed reading it.
Best wishes, Emily
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2009
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I have to agree with you victortouche that this poem is truly whimsical. Very nicely worded and presented, you did a great job. I truly enjoyed reading it.
Best wishes, Emily
Comment Written 31-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2009
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So very nice of U. Thanks.
Comment from mountainwriter49
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It was light hearted, fun and equally importantly--it speaks about something deep and important--seeking knowledge beyond what we already know. I loved these lines:
"But if you're anxious to see / beyond that you know / come with me." Well written. Thanks for sharing. M
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. It was light hearted, fun and equally importantly--it speaks about something deep and important--seeking knowledge beyond what we already know. I loved these lines:
"But if you're anxious to see / beyond that you know / come with me." Well written. Thanks for sharing. M
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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Thank you for a very nice review. Glad U enjoyed.
Comment from skye
Liliting, lyrical and enjoyable to read.
All are good in a poem, making it fun to see what comes next.
I love the choice of artwork and color.. fresh and clean.
I enjoyed the last lines... they made me want to join in and tag along.
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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Liliting, lyrical and enjoyable to read.
All are good in a poem, making it fun to see what comes next.
I love the choice of artwork and color.. fresh and clean.
I enjoyed the last lines... they made me want to join in and tag along.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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Thank you for the review. Gives me a Rocky Mountain high.
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your whimsy and your songlike repeats. I especially liked your "weatherman's nose" metaphor and your bits of rhyme. I hope to read more of your work in the New Year--cheers!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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I enjoyed your whimsy and your songlike repeats. I especially liked your "weatherman's nose" metaphor and your bits of rhyme. I hope to read more of your work in the New Year--cheers!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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I hope U will read more good ones, too. Ah, Malibu.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This poem contains some nice thoughts about society and the way it affects the life of an individual. I like the simplicity of this poem and the fact that it can make one think. kyudos
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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This poem contains some nice thoughts about society and the way it affects the life of an individual. I like the simplicity of this poem and the fact that it can make one think. kyudos
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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Very nice review, and thank you.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, I loved this merry song lyrics! Lyrics are harder to write than regular poetry, and you've done a stellar job! I loved your picture, and font, and the easygoing, upbeat tone of the piece.
This was my favorite:
I'm ridin' a dark horse
and writin' some prose.
Sayin' the same thing today
as before I suppose.
Hopin' for sunshine
got a weatherman's nose.
A very delightful write.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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Oh, I loved this merry song lyrics! Lyrics are harder to write than regular poetry, and you've done a stellar job! I loved your picture, and font, and the easygoing, upbeat tone of the piece.
This was my favorite:
I'm ridin' a dark horse
and writin' some prose.
Sayin' the same thing today
as before I suppose.
Hopin' for sunshine
got a weatherman's nose.
A very delightful write.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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I'm blushing! But it really helps to get support. Thank you.
Comment from anabellapongasi
This is a very enjoyable whimsical piece. I had fun reading it. I like the picture of climbing a tree and seeing whatever there is to see beyond...oh what fun!...Very well written, flows well.
Anabella
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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This is a very enjoyable whimsical piece. I had fun reading it. I like the picture of climbing a tree and seeing whatever there is to see beyond...oh what fun!...Very well written, flows well.
Anabella
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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I must say, your review carried in it the essence of the poem. Thank you.
Comment from patmedium
Victor... I have never encountered a poem quite like this before! What a pleasant thoughtful sit I've just had up in your tree with you. I've re-read it for the third time, trying to find any part which I feel is particularily noteworthy.... No dice!
............................................................................................................................................ALL of it is noteworthy! Pat.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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Victor... I have never encountered a poem quite like this before! What a pleasant thoughtful sit I've just had up in your tree with you. I've re-read it for the third time, trying to find any part which I feel is particularily noteworthy.... No dice!
............................................................................................................................................ALL of it is noteworthy! Pat.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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As nice a review as any I've had. Thank you.
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Just a pro forma note, saying 'Ta for't review, pal!'
Comment from Amicus
This is a pleasant and light-hearted little poem, victor. I like it for its whimsical tone, its jaunty rhythm and the happy invitation to escapism that it offers and delivers on--if but for a brief moment. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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This is a pleasant and light-hearted little poem, victor. I like it for its whimsical tone, its jaunty rhythm and the happy invitation to escapism that it offers and delivers on--if but for a brief moment. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2009
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A succint and pleasant but professional review, as always. Thank you.
