Anxious and Me
Just a little ditty in motion.35 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
I loved the rainbow and the art work here.Wonderful words expressed about "Anxious and Me"
I loved the interaction on the bridge helping one another, to cross this bridge. We all get anxious some more then others and helping someone with their anxiety will surely help.
Great writing.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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I loved the rainbow and the art work here.Wonderful words expressed about "Anxious and Me"
I loved the interaction on the bridge helping one another, to cross this bridge. We all get anxious some more then others and helping someone with their anxiety will surely help.
Great writing.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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thank you honeytree. And thank you for not being upset with my review.
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I enjoyed your writing here very much. No I am not upset by reviews. I learn everyday as a writer.
Have a great New Year.
Honeytree.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Anxious and Me' is a delightfully written piece and there's nothing I'd enjoy more than to climb a tree with this extremely talented poet. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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'Anxious and Me' is a delightfully written piece and there's nothing I'd enjoy more than to climb a tree with this extremely talented poet. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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I'll get over to Drumborg. Can U make a tree reservation? How about high tea in a tree?
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I can do even better. How would you like a tree reservation in one of our native tea-trees? High tea will never be the same after you've experienced this!
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
Interesting poem. I had fun climbing that poetic tree with you and looking around at the broader vista at all there is to see. I'm anxious to see beyond what I know. Best wishes to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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Interesting poem. I had fun climbing that poetic tree with you and looking around at the broader vista at all there is to see. I'm anxious to see beyond what I know. Best wishes to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 01-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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Thank you so much. I enjoyed your review. Happy New Year.
Comment from Amfunny
Well, I must say, this was rather cute. It did have a song feel to it and I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. It was very lighthearted and fun.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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Well, I must say, this was rather cute. It did have a song feel to it and I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. It was very lighthearted and fun.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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You're always too good to me, but keep it up!
Comment from Connie P
Great song lyrics. I would love to hear the music you would use to accompany this song. I liked the catchy repetition that lyrics must have to survive.
Blessings,
Connie P
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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Great song lyrics. I would love to hear the music you would use to accompany this song. I liked the catchy repetition that lyrics must have to survive.
Blessings,
Connie P
Comment Written 31-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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Now that's a compliment, comin from an old tailspinner.
Comment from FredCollingwood
Thsi would make a great song. I see it as something for children and adults as well. I love the rhyme and the way it flows.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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Thsi would make a great song. I see it as something for children and adults as well. I love the rhyme and the way it flows.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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First of all thank you. Secondly, i looked at your profile. Very impressive. No, don't deny it. You must remember people like U can still be an inspiration to the rest of us. And yes, U are growing old surrounded by beautiful women.
victortouche
Comment from wierdgrace
Such a cute and wonderul poem, no errors and no revisions, enjoyable, and the rymes are so great, the poem was something you could read to anyone, Happy new year.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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Such a cute and wonderul poem, no errors and no revisions, enjoyable, and the rymes are so great, the poem was something you could read to anyone, Happy new year.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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I am humbly appreciative of ur comments.
Comment from Oatmeal
victortouche,
The flow was very nice. The theme was good. The artwork complimented your poem. Your arrangement looks very nice.
It is perfectly written and completely error free.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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victortouche,
The flow was very nice. The theme was good. The artwork complimented your poem. Your arrangement looks very nice.
It is perfectly written and completely error free.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 31-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2010
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Oatmeal, thank you as always. I hope U are doing well, and happy new Year.
Comment from womanwriter
Cute, and I have a tree... though I doubt that I could climb the actual one - perhaps I'll climb higher in my 'mental' one - a good book, some reviewing on fanstory, and maybe today, I will even write a bit of my own fantasy.
Enjoyed it greatly.
Womanwriter
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2009
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Cute, and I have a tree... though I doubt that I could climb the actual one - perhaps I'll climb higher in my 'mental' one - a good book, some reviewing on fanstory, and maybe today, I will even write a bit of my own fantasy.
Enjoyed it greatly.
Womanwriter
Comment Written 31-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2009
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A very wonderful and humbling commentary. Thank you.
Comment from dportwood
victortouche,
I really like the catchy structure of this piece. It is so uniquely pleasant that the reckless rhyme and meter are lost to the reader in his enjoyment of the words. Well done.
Duane
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2009
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victortouche,
I really like the catchy structure of this piece. It is so uniquely pleasant that the reckless rhyme and meter are lost to the reader in his enjoyment of the words. Well done.
Duane
Comment Written 31-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2009
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Thank you. U have enjoyed and understood as I hoped.
