Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Love is Such a Mysterious Thing"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
4 total reviews
Comment from amel
Ooooh what a beautiful poem. I Love this! Love is such a mysterious thing,
it comes and goes, but always is. With divine power it delights to live
in the hearts of those who long to give..." Wooow, I am really happy to find this lovely poem. Great Job. Blessings, amel.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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Ooooh what a beautiful poem. I Love this! Love is such a mysterious thing,
it comes and goes, but always is. With divine power it delights to live
in the hearts of those who long to give..." Wooow, I am really happy to find this lovely poem. Great Job. Blessings, amel.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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Thank you amel for your wonderful and encouraging words about my poem, glad you found it. Love Sarah
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Thank you sweet Amel, lovely to hear from you. Love Sarah
Comment from L.lora
Sarah what a pleasant
easy to read well crafted
poem you've given us. Your
word choices deftly describe
your heartfelt emotions on
love. Very nice. no nits or
spags. Lora
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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Sarah what a pleasant
easy to read well crafted
poem you've given us. Your
word choices deftly describe
your heartfelt emotions on
love. Very nice. no nits or
spags. Lora
Comment Written 02-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2010
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Thank you Lora for encouraging me to keep going with my poem writing. Really appreciate it a lot. With regards Sarah
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Thank you L.lora for your beautiful comment about my poem. It means a lot to me, more than words can tell. Love Sarah
Comment from percival86jack
What a beautiful little poem about the mysteries of love my friend.
And thank you for becoming a fan Sara. I hope I don't disappoint.
Our best friend Lynda was diagnosed with Parkinson's about twenty years ago. What a brave soul she is with such a zest for life. She is involved in so many activities in our little community, she puts us all to shame. She is also a marvelous writer of short stories and a member of FanStory. Her screen name is "lynmck"
Cheers and happy holiday wishes... Jack xoxox
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2009
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What a beautiful little poem about the mysteries of love my friend.
And thank you for becoming a fan Sara. I hope I don't disappoint.
Our best friend Lynda was diagnosed with Parkinson's about twenty years ago. What a brave soul she is with such a zest for life. She is involved in so many activities in our little community, she puts us all to shame. She is also a marvelous writer of short stories and a member of FanStory. Her screen name is "lynmck"
Cheers and happy holiday wishes... Jack xoxox
Comment Written 21-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2009
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Thank you for great review. It was very helpful. Merry Christmas, Sarah
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Hi! Jack. Thank you for your great review. It is really helpful. Merry Christmas to you and also to your friend Lynda
Comment from ZeBestBlonde1
Hello to you,
A most excellent choice of words for your title. I would capitalize it, Love is Such a Mysterious Thing and do your title justice
Great words inside and they all flowed very well. The background color isn't pretty enough for your poem, and a more appealing color to the font as well would work
Still...I do NOT rate on those things, just the quality of your work and I thought your poem was very strong, what you wrote rings true in many ways
So...GREAT JOB!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2009
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Hello to you,
A most excellent choice of words for your title. I would capitalize it, Love is Such a Mysterious Thing and do your title justice
Great words inside and they all flowed very well. The background color isn't pretty enough for your poem, and a more appealing color to the font as well would work
Still...I do NOT rate on those things, just the quality of your work and I thought your poem was very strong, what you wrote rings true in many ways
So...GREAT JOB!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2009
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Thank you for your great review, it is really helpful.
