Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Grasping the Spirit's Mystery"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
26 total reviews
Comment from Adorable dwarf
Wow! I am not much of person who likes poetry, but this is truly amazing! I just kept reading it. Your words are moving! Your words seem to hint something that you have to read between the lines.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Wow! I am not much of person who likes poetry, but this is truly amazing! I just kept reading it. Your words are moving! Your words seem to hint something that you have to read between the lines.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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You're amazing and it's a wonderful thing and a gift being able read what's said between the lines what the writing is all about. I'm so happy for your insight and that they're an inspiration to your heart. Also, thanks a lot for giving me 6 stars.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
It's so amazing when our hands just writes the words that are coming from above. I really liked this part:"When I want My heart to share,
you must show Me that you care
by your little deeds so fine,
and singing spirit sublime.
Will you be as an open book?
Transparency is for what I look
to be as loving as I would be
in the spirit, wild and free." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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It's so amazing when our hands just writes the words that are coming from above. I really liked this part:"When I want My heart to share,
you must show Me that you care
by your little deeds so fine,
and singing spirit sublime.
Will you be as an open book?
Transparency is for what I look
to be as loving as I would be
in the spirit, wild and free." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and your input on the poem. I really appreciate it and I'm glad you like it.
Gb
Comment from Nowhereman1
This is a very well written poem. I like the rhyming scheme and poem structure. The subject is very well presented. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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This is a very well written poem. I like the rhyming scheme and poem structure. The subject is very well presented. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and for your input about my poem. I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Law of love, presented in paired rhyming lines within three octaves,finds that the love coming down needs to be spread around to all of us here on the ground.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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This poem, Law of love, presented in paired rhyming lines within three octaves,finds that the love coming down needs to be spread around to all of us here on the ground.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your excellent review. I really like your assessment on it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the law of love. When the spirit of love is within us we can only see the good in others and we want to share the spirit we received with others too.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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A very well-written poem about the law of love. When the spirit of love is within us we can only see the good in others and we want to share the spirit we received with others too.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much, Sandra. I hope you are bathed in love in your life and are enjoying S. Africa.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks poet's feeling and experience of fully formed spirit state and her experience of hearing the song to come straight from heaven; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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This poem speaks poet's feeling and experience of fully formed spirit state and her experience of hearing the song to come straight from heaven; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate your insight. I hope you find the same in my other poems.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, for me sometimes it's as easy as taking dictation, it's good being God's stenographer. I never get writer's block, nor am I bereft of theme or rhythm. But you obviously are inspired by the Lord of hosts, I love this very articulate, smooth.and well rhymed in aabbccdd obtains, well dine, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Oh yes indeed, for me sometimes it's as easy as taking dictation, it's good being God's stenographer. I never get writer's block, nor am I bereft of theme or rhythm. But you obviously are inspired by the Lord of hosts, I love this very articulate, smooth.and well rhymed in aabbccdd obtains, well dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and reaction to my writing. The input you gave was very helpful to me and I appreciate it very much. God bless you.
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Well done
Comment from JLR
dear poet, your poem reflects the deep conviction that your are Loved by the BELOVED and all that is contained by HIS love for you is sustained in whatever acts you do. Thank you for sharing this wonderful Spiritual verse given to us through you!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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dear poet, your poem reflects the deep conviction that your are Loved by the BELOVED and all that is contained by HIS love for you is sustained in whatever acts you do. Thank you for sharing this wonderful Spiritual verse given to us through you!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. Yes, I do have that deep conviction and assurance of His love and I pray you do, too. I hope you find the same in my other poems and are blessed by them.
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
For your sentiment and faith, I could rate you higher.
Couplets are far from my favorates. And your testimony that this poem "just came to you while not sleeping so much, leaves the impression that excellence does not come easy.. I think there's a little pain the superior.
Don
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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For your sentiment and faith, I could rate you higher.
Couplets are far from my favorates. And your testimony that this poem "just came to you while not sleeping so much, leaves the impression that excellence does not come easy.. I think there's a little pain the superior.
Don
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing this poem. I appreciate you taking the time to do it.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
The second line of your poem are you missing a word? I don't understand you must ----all -- your spirit
I love and understood it all, only this one
I'm I reading it wrong if so I'm very sorry.
Cookie
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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The second line of your poem are you missing a word? I don't understand you must ----all -- your spirit
I love and understood it all, only this one
I'm I reading it wrong if so I'm very sorry.
Cookie
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Very good point I'll look into it. Thank you for helpful remark and I appreciate it.
