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Vers Beaucoup (see notes)64 total reviews
Comment from CCasetta
What a terrific piece to read. I LOVED the Vers Beaucoup (I'd not before seen it), and I especially enjoyed that which you did with it. The words were fun (stent/dent--that's a baaaaad day...), and it was a great read. Great poetry.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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What a terrific piece to read. I LOVED the Vers Beaucoup (I'd not before seen it), and I especially enjoyed that which you did with it. The words were fun (stent/dent--that's a baaaaad day...), and it was a great read. Great poetry.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Thank you, CCasetta!
My portfolio has a few more in it, (like a couple of dozen!) But please do not feel obligated to read every one of them. Every other one would be fine.
As with all my poems, there are elements of truth mixed into it, but hey, who has ever had a good "discount" lawyer?
Thanks again,
Curt
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I'll check them out some time.
--(another) Curt
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Curt what intrigued me is your internal rhyme.
I'm so use to seeing end rhyme mixed with internal rhyme, but you have an unique way of waving you internal rhymes and also used enjambment.
Good work.
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Hi Curt what intrigued me is your internal rhyme.
I'm so use to seeing end rhyme mixed with internal rhyme, but you have an unique way of waving you internal rhymes and also used enjambment.
Good work.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Thanks Gert.
It's not really so new as not used so much. I like to play with rhymes, and this form is a great way for me to stretch the limits of poetic expressiion.
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Hi Curt well I like it.
and found it fun to read
Gert
Comment from jl & bandit
So new am I to this, that now I must try to do it....oh how fun it is to read.....will you review it when I'm done to see if I get it right?
I'll post it tomorrow if I think I've got one...
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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So new am I to this, that now I must try to do it....oh how fun it is to read.....will you review it when I'm done to see if I get it right?
I'll post it tomorrow if I think I've got one...
Comment Written 04-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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You have a deal! PM if you'd like with the rough draft and I will give you an IMHO.
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awesome..I'll let you know.
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ok i already have a question.
ok maybe two..LOL
are ther any limits on the number of lines in the stanzas? and are there a limit on the stanzas?
jl
Comment from Begin Again
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Curt
Quite a story you had to tell in your poem...glad to know it was just a touch of humor and not true to life. Your poem meets all the requirements as far as I can tell.
Carol
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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my blance sank balance
Curt
Quite a story you had to tell in your poem...glad to know it was just a touch of humor and not true to life. Your poem meets all the requirements as far as I can tell.
Carol
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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As far as you can tell? Believe me, it's correct in adherence to the form! (I kinda invented it, ya know? nod nod, wink wink) And as always in my work, there is a touch of truth in every piece I write. Just don't ask which part! lol
Thanks so much,
Curt
