F@#^%n' Bernie
Vers Beaucoup (see notes)64 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is a really interesting poetry style that I've never heard of before. The poem is funny. I enjoyed reading it in spite of the high level language. Bernie really did a number on you. LOL.
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This is a really interesting poetry style that I've never heard of before. The poem is funny. I enjoyed reading it in spite of the high level language. Bernie really did a number on you. LOL.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
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Yea, if I took every bad situation in my life and put it into one day, this would be the result.
Thanks so much for your thoughts,
Curt
Comment from IndianaIrish
Hi Curt. No matter who uses your format, no one makes more of an impact than you. It's great to read a vers beaucoup from a master...and I always expect to hear a DJ reading it outloud to me. lol Welcome back.
Indy
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Hi Curt. No matter who uses your format, no one makes more of an impact than you. It's great to read a vers beaucoup from a master...and I always expect to hear a DJ reading it outloud to me. lol Welcome back.
Indy
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Well, you know me, always HAVE to make an entrance! lol
Your thoughts mean a lot to me, coming as they do from such a contest winning poet as yourself.
Always,
Curt
Comment from Oatmeal
Curt Mongold,
Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible. Understandable and thought provoking but especially insightful comments.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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Curt Mongold,
Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible. Understandable and thought provoking but especially insightful comments.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Thanks Oatmeal for your thoughts and comments.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from Kathy58
Curt, this is a great write that you have created here. Yet another new type of poetry I have learned today by reviewing. I love this creation a lot. Also very descriptive. I have one question though. What makes this a satire? I do not know what that means either. Thanks for sharing such a delighful piece. Kathy58
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Curt, this is a great write that you have created here. Yet another new type of poetry I have learned today by reviewing. I love this creation a lot. Also very descriptive. I have one question though. What makes this a satire? I do not know what that means either. Thanks for sharing such a delighful piece. Kathy58
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
Kathy58,
Satire:
A literary technique of writing or art which principally ridicules its subject often as an intended means of provoking or preventing change, which usually incorporates criticism.
Perhaps it isn't the PUREST form of satire, but I get so tired of listing everything as comedy!
Thanks so much for your thoughts,
Curt
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Curt, thanks for sharing with me what a satire means, Kathy
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Curt, thanks for sharing with me what a satire means, Kathy
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Curt...it is nice to see a poem from your pen and I might add an exceptional one. I see your muse is alive and well. I hope you meant this poem to be humorous because it did make me grin. Especially the part about the infamous Bernie! I like the enjambment and internal rhyming. I used to do a lot of that and don't know why I don't anymore. Excellent...good to have you back....chey
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Hi Curt...it is nice to see a poem from your pen and I might add an exceptional one. I see your muse is alive and well. I hope you meant this poem to be humorous because it did make me grin. Especially the part about the infamous Bernie! I like the enjambment and internal rhyming. I used to do a lot of that and don't know why I don't anymore. Excellent...good to have you back....chey
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Thanks Chey!
I really had a lot of fun with this one, just to say "hey" to everybody.
I hope to be doing more once I get a decent internet connection!
Thanks again my friend,
Curt
Comment from Abba Lin
Hi Curt...I actually liked your poem, the rhymes and flow were great... I'm sure most of us get the first part of your poem...always strugges for sure and we are all tired.. Then the twist of the cops and all, how witty.. Great job... As a lady, there is still some of us out there that, that f------language justs make us cringe, but the poem was cool... Love Lin
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Hi Curt...I actually liked your poem, the rhymes and flow were great... I'm sure most of us get the first part of your poem...always strugges for sure and we are all tired.. Then the twist of the cops and all, how witty.. Great job... As a lady, there is still some of us out there that, that f------language justs make us cringe, but the poem was cool... Love Lin
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Thank you for your most kind and generous review Lin.
The language is a bit harsh, but I've never been one to shy away from exercising my poetic license in using "gutter" talk when relevant to the issue. In this case, it seemed most appropo.
Thank you again for the lovely thoughts,
Curt
Comment from Judian James
Oh, how wonderful to read something from your pen again Curt. I was just thinking about your wonderful vers beaucoup the other day and how it was time for me to write another one someday soon! This is excellent. Welcome back
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Oh, how wonderful to read something from your pen again Curt. I was just thinking about your wonderful vers beaucoup the other day and how it was time for me to write another one someday soon! This is excellent. Welcome back
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Thanks Jude!
I am glad to be back and writing again. This time of year seems to be my "writing time."
I hope to be here for awhile anyway, thanks for the comments and the welcome Jude, I really do appreciate it.
Sincerely,
Curt
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It's good to hear from you Curt. I hope all is well!
Comment from Nicnac
Woop Woop
Curt is back!
It's good to see you, friend!
I've missed you and your enjambing poems. ;)
Well, when it rains it pours... Your money is gone, dents in your car, someone tossed out your clothes, you're arrested, your lawyer screws you over and you get shot on your way to prison. Dang. That's a crappy day! I think I've had a day or two like that. haha
I love your humor and your fabulous Vers Beaucoup.
I suppose your landscaping is completed? Or did Bernie sabotage that as well? LOL
Your artwork is not displaying - perhaps you could take another look at that.
Nic
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Woop Woop
Curt is back!
It's good to see you, friend!
I've missed you and your enjambing poems. ;)
Well, when it rains it pours... Your money is gone, dents in your car, someone tossed out your clothes, you're arrested, your lawyer screws you over and you get shot on your way to prison. Dang. That's a crappy day! I think I've had a day or two like that. haha
I love your humor and your fabulous Vers Beaucoup.
I suppose your landscaping is completed? Or did Bernie sabotage that as well? LOL
Your artwork is not displaying - perhaps you could take another look at that.
Nic
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Hey girlfriend!!
Yes, I am back, and yes, the landscaping is done, although it wasn't finished. (long story)
Thanks for your warm welcome back Nic, I truly appreciate it!
Always,
Curt
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Curt,
An interesting form and a rather oddball subject I think. Lawyers are the second oldest profession according to my sources. So Bernie is probably ...
Liked the rhythmn and the rhyming scheme.
Patrick
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Hi Curt,
An interesting form and a rather oddball subject I think. Lawyers are the second oldest profession according to my sources. So Bernie is probably ...
Liked the rhythmn and the rhyming scheme.
Patrick
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Thanks Patrick.
It's different that's for sure, but hell, I like different, it makes the world go 'round.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from Dklrdmcches
Not a fan of the language, could have been without, but besides the language, your whimsical piece was very good. The humor that was found throughout was very pleasing and I enjoyed the story. best of luck to you and your writing...DKLRD
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Not a fan of the language, could have been without, but besides the language, your whimsical piece was very good. The humor that was found throughout was very pleasing and I enjoyed the story. best of luck to you and your writing...DKLRD
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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We all have our personal likes and dislikes, but I did put a warning label on this sucker.
Thanks for your time and comments. I do appreciate them.
Sincerely,
Curt
