F@#^%n' Bernie
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Comment from dayan1980
How talented are you? Well its not a question really. I really enjoyed your sense of humor. Poor Bernie!!!
I look forward to reading more of your works. There are no suggestions that I can make as there are no changes that i believe need to be made. :)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2009
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How talented are you? Well its not a question really. I really enjoyed your sense of humor. Poor Bernie!!!
I look forward to reading more of your works. There are no suggestions that I can make as there are no changes that i believe need to be made. :)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2009
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I'm glad you qualified that question! Asking me about my talent is like asking an apple how good it tatses!
I truly appreciate your thoughts on this piece Dayan.
Curt
Comment from amel
Dear Curt,
I enjoy this poem, even there are some words that I am not used to find in most common poems, but you wrote this in a nice alliteration , so it flows. Probably, I could say this is a new thing for me because my mother language is not English. I am Indonesian. Regards, amel
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2009
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Dear Curt,
I enjoy this poem, even there are some words that I am not used to find in most common poems, but you wrote this in a nice alliteration , so it flows. Probably, I could say this is a new thing for me because my mother language is not English. I am Indonesian. Regards, amel
Comment Written 06-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2009
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Thanks Amel, your comments are very much appreciated.
Sincerely,
Curt
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You are welcome Curt. Sincerely, amel
Comment from Sloughi
A thoroughly enjoyable piece. Loved the rhyming style, it just skips along carrying the reader onwards. A real pleasure to read and reveiw
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2009
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A thoroughly enjoyable piece. Loved the rhyming style, it just skips along carrying the reader onwards. A real pleasure to read and reveiw
Comment Written 06-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2009
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Thank you for your review and rating.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from christopherjl
I really enjoyed this poem. It was amusing as well as the style and flow of it was outstanding. Thanks for sharing with us here on FanStory. I have no suggestions for your writing.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2009
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I really enjoyed this poem. It was amusing as well as the style and flow of it was outstanding. Thanks for sharing with us here on FanStory. I have no suggestions for your writing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2009
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Thank you!
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from babylonia
this is one of those styles i'm not sure how to do but it sure looks cool when you or some of the others do it. nicely done. poor guy. i get the feeling this isn't his day. LOL imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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this is one of those styles i'm not sure how to do but it sure looks cool when you or some of the others do it. nicely done. poor guy. i get the feeling this isn't his day. LOL imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Thanks Barbara.
It is fun to write in this style (for me anyway)
I am so glad you liked it.
Sincerely,
Curt
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curt,
it looks fun. maybe some day i will try it.
love,
barbara
Comment from FredCollingwood
I've always enjoyed your postings, so how could I resist reading something by you with this title. I'm glad I read it. It's excellent--lots of fun.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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I've always enjoyed your postings, so how could I resist reading something by you with this title. I'm glad I read it. It's excellent--lots of fun.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Ah, Fred, if only you were posting a few senryus now and again.
On to bigger and better things of course.
Thanks for the thumbs up on this one. i value your thoughts.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
It's a real good poem, Bernie, maybe a little bit "colorful" but what the heck? With such a life as that one deserves the liberty to speak out about it and use whatever language presents itself! It was truly humorous in spots and describes quite accurately the way one feels at times. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Whizpurr ^-^
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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It's a real good poem, Bernie, maybe a little bit "colorful" but what the heck? With such a life as that one deserves the liberty to speak out about it and use whatever language presents itself! It was truly humorous in spots and describes quite accurately the way one feels at times. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Whizpurr ^-^
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Thanks!
You're such a "whiz" at understanding the use of colorful poetic license!
I enjoyed your thoughts on this piece. Thank you again.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from lola29
No! Not dents in the car. I was driving away from the dealership when I hit a bus. But, no more complaining after reading your go of it.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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No! Not dents in the car. I was driving away from the dealership when I hit a bus. But, no more complaining after reading your go of it.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Am I the only one who has days like this? lol
Thanks so much for your time and for the review.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from fictionwriter
Your life sucks man. I wouldn't blame Bernie though, it's not his fault you can't get you s---t together. Very funny though. Great job.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Your life sucks man. I wouldn't blame Bernie though, it's not his fault you can't get you s---t together. Very funny though. Great job.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Never had a bad yerself I guess?
Thanks for the review my friend,
Curt
Comment from HalfHoff
I get it - and was not offended in the least -- I don't know if I have ever had the pleasure of seeing your face before -- love the updated bio and this write! Lea Ann
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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I get it - and was not offended in the least -- I don't know if I have ever had the pleasure of seeing your face before -- love the updated bio and this write! Lea Ann
Comment Written 05-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2009
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Thank you!!
I'll have to say some were offended by the few f--ks, but you can't please everybody every time!! (Unless you're really good!) lol
Thanks again,
Curt
