Comment from Vladilynn

Excellent

Wow!! delightful dark and seem really you're having fun!!!! Let's look for that Bernie someday! okay!? Right now let's write more about him! :D

This a funny and very interesting piece!
I guess welcome back!!!

Love much
Lynn:0)

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2009

It's so strange you should mention that> I included Bernie in a new I penned only yesterday. You'll have to wait for it though, it is going to be a contest submission.
Thanks so much for your thoughts,
Curt

reply by Vladilynn on 13-Dec-2009

Well, don't forget to inform me!:0)

Comment from Rvaltaysesd

Excellent

I quite like your poem has good flow and rhyme, I quite enjoyed reading your poem, I felt very good, greetings Rvaltaysesd

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2009

Thanks!
Sincerely,
Curt

Comment from Pyrrhonian

Good

Pretty funny stuff, with some nice driving rhymes. My favorite stanza, and one we all know unfortunately too well! is here:

Fill the tank, then the bank, my balance sank
to blank just that quick, makes me sick
as I pick up my receipt from the neat,
smiling cheat behind the windows.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2009

Thanks for the thoughts!
Sincerely,
Curt

Comment from rockcandy

Excellent

Good poem! Good use of a strict form applied to a certainly modern topic...I thoroughly enjoyed it and had quite a laugh! Thanks again,
Jamy :)

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2009

Thank you Jamy!
Sincerely,
Curt

Comment from oledihard

Exceptional

OMG! This is the bomb! I have my daughter laughing as we read. This is some great work.SOOOOOOOOO different. I'm glad it's different. The best I've seen in a long time. Damn that Bernie!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2009

You certainly honor me with your rating and comments! I'm glad there is someone else out there with my warped sense of humor!
Thanks again,
Curt

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Even without the profanity, it would appear you had a bad day. Even your image failed to appear. This is very well written with good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2009

Yea, when it rains, it pours!!
Thanks for your comments,
Curt

reply by c_lucas on 07-Dec-2009

You're welcome, Curt. Charlie

Comment from another jim

Excellent

Splendid piece of poetry, Curt! Love the 'sting' these verses contain. Sharp, witty, and in your face. A perfect paean to your apparently inept attorney! LOL!

Interesting form and rhyme scheme, too. Thoroughly enjoyable poem! Thanks for sharing...Jim.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2009

Thanks Jim!
The contest ought to be a lot of fun too. Always some interesting entries!
Sincerely,
Curt

Comment from Jordan Rose

Excellent

this was great! Thanks for the explanation. It was very helpful. Good job with the rhymes and the 3 word max! That's amazing! Jordan

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2009

Thanks Jordan!
It is a lot of fun for me to write in this style. Exercises the ole brain cell I have left!
Sincerely,
Curt

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Hi Curt - tell me, what is a stent?
Have never heard of it - but then, I'm
only a mere woman.

Your words certainly made the reader sit up
and take notice, altho I have to admit I'm
not keen on the over-use of the f word, but
then, I have to give you credit, you did warn
us.

Welcome back.
Margaret.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2009

Hi Maragaret!
A stent is a little metal tybe they put in an artery, usually a coronary one, to keep it open after it has been clogged.
And yes, I have one.
Thanks so much,
Curt

reply by Margaret Snowdon on 08-Dec-2009

Thank you for replying, Curt -- and I wish you good health always. Margaret.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hokay! Now then. First off, where is Bernie's picture. I want to see the scoundrel so I make sure I'll never hire him. this is a fun poem for me, Curt. Good job all things considered including the expletives..LOL..Bob

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2009

Thanks Bob.
The pic wouldn't come up. Just another insult to the injury I suppose!
Thanks again,
Curt