Red Lives In The Hood
A red cape and a lesson to learn....36 total reviews
Comment from fictionwriter
A wonderful little story, however Red still talked to the strangers. I enjoyed the story though, and you did a great job with the writing.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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A wonderful little story, however Red still talked to the strangers. I enjoyed the story though, and you did a great job with the writing.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Joy
I hoped that it would show the children the many different approaches that a bad person could take. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Smiles, Carol
Comment from misscookie
This one made me smile ts a good one for sre. as always i love everything you write
keep up the good work. I'm all most finish with Marissa and OOPs to the chief now I just got to take a break and get I never knew him finish it's giving me a headach and thats not good.
Keep on writing good no wonderful works.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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This one made me smile ts a good one for sre. as always i love everything you write
keep up the good work. I'm all most finish with Marissa and OOPs to the chief now I just got to take a break and get I never knew him finish it's giving me a headach and thats not good.
Keep on writing good no wonderful works.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Cookie
Thanks for the great review. I always appreciate your comments. Smiles to you always, Carol
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you welcome
Comment from missy98writer
Begin Again.
Your tale of "Red Lives in the Hood" is well written. I thing you've written an enjoyable children's story. Your great at fiction tales. I love your description of Red:
"She danced across the floor, spinning round and round, and tossing her strawberry blonde curls everywhere."
Oh no, creep alert. I'm glad Red remembered her mamma's warning about talking to strangers. Good for Red for walking away an not go with the 'nice man' to look for his dog. Right, he has and dog and pigs do fly.
Then low and behold a strange lady tries to lure her away. I liked it when she saves her grandmother. I loved what Red told her:
"Red shook her little finger at her Grandma. "See what happens when you talk to strangers, Grandma."
Bravo, you've written a great tale that even kids could relate to. It was my pleasure to read your writing.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Begin Again.
Your tale of "Red Lives in the Hood" is well written. I thing you've written an enjoyable children's story. Your great at fiction tales. I love your description of Red:
"She danced across the floor, spinning round and round, and tossing her strawberry blonde curls everywhere."
Oh no, creep alert. I'm glad Red remembered her mamma's warning about talking to strangers. Good for Red for walking away an not go with the 'nice man' to look for his dog. Right, he has and dog and pigs do fly.
Then low and behold a strange lady tries to lure her away. I liked it when she saves her grandmother. I loved what Red told her:
"Red shook her little finger at her Grandma. "See what happens when you talk to strangers, Grandma."
Bravo, you've written a great tale that even kids could relate to. It was my pleasure to read your writing.
Melissa.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Melissa
Glad you enjoyed this little approach to teaching a child about the many bad ways a person could approach an unsuspecting child. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from adewpearl
Boy, it's a good thing she is one savvy little girl whose mommy taught her well because she sure runs into a whole boatload of trouble!!! They must have shipped a whole mess of strangers into her neighborhood with a discount rate. LOL What a cool way to show kids that they must not fall for all these tricks strangers actually use to lure them. And the ending is just delightful. Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Boy, it's a good thing she is one savvy little girl whose mommy taught her well because she sure runs into a whole boatload of trouble!!! They must have shipped a whole mess of strangers into her neighborhood with a discount rate. LOL What a cool way to show kids that they must not fall for all these tricks strangers actually use to lure them. And the ending is just delightful. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Brooke
Thanks for reading my children's story...I was hoping that it would show a child the many different ways a bad person could choose to approach a child. Glad you liked the ending...Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from Sasha
This is just delightful. You did a wonderful job with this. I enjoyed it immensely and think it was very well written. You kept my interest from beginning to end.
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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This is just delightful. You did a wonderful job with this. I enjoyed it immensely and think it was very well written. You kept my interest from beginning to end.
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Sash
I am so glad that you enjoyed my children's story about strangers. I appreciate the review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Carol,
This story of your will make a great story for children to read a very strong message and lesson with you story well told and easy for children to read and understand
smiles
Gert
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Hello Carol,
This story of your will make a great story for children to read a very strong message and lesson with you story well told and easy for children to read and understand
smiles
Gert
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Gert
I was hoping that a child would learn the many different ways a stranger might choose to approach a child. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Smiles to you, Carol
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Hello Carol, you are weocme
Drop by sometime.
Gert
