Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The White Fairy"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from Winslow
Dear Sara,
Excellent rhyming and flow in your verse. I suppose the white fairy is a metaphor for your friend who does only good. Pure in heart she will inherit the earth.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Dear Sara,
Excellent rhyming and flow in your verse. I suppose the white fairy is a metaphor for your friend who does only good. Pure in heart she will inherit the earth.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 28-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you for your clear and detailed review, it was really helpful. With my regards, Sarah
Comment from MissMerri
This was a pleasure to read. It is well written with a lovely flow and meter, and a sweet message as well. I could see nothing I'd want to change. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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This was a pleasure to read. It is well written with a lovely flow and meter, and a sweet message as well. I could see nothing I'd want to change. Nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you very much for your helpful and lovely review from your heart, it was really helpful. With my best regards, Sarah
Comment from laren
This is a very nice poem which tell us about love and tender. You honored friendship throug your fantasy and your writting. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
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This is a very nice poem which tell us about love and tender. You honored friendship throug your fantasy and your writting. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 28-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
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Thank you for you'r great review, and what you say about my poem lifted my spirit. Love Sarah
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Thank you very much. I feel touched.
Laren
Comment from Kellytr
Sarahice, What a special friend you are, and what a special friend you have. She must be so comforted to read these words spoken from your heart. A lovely poem. Kelly
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
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Sarahice, What a special friend you are, and what a special friend you have. She must be so comforted to read these words spoken from your heart. A lovely poem. Kelly
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
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Thank you for you'r wonderful review about my poem and you'r comments about my friend. Yes, she's a very special person in my life. Someone I'll newer forget. Love Sarah
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Thank you for you'r wonderful reply, really appreciate and thankful for it. Love Sarah
Comment from Heidixoxo
This is most definately a beautifully written poem. I enjoyed this immensely and found no need for any changes. Very inspirational and made for a great read. Job well done and best of luck with this............xoxo
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
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This is most definately a beautifully written poem. I enjoyed this immensely and found no need for any changes. Very inspirational and made for a great read. Job well done and best of luck with this............xoxo
Comment Written 28-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
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Thank you for you'r amazing review and kind words about my poem and my writing. I am glad it inspired you in a way it did, my first posted poem.
If this is indeed your very first posting for poetry, then you have a great skill for it. Use it wisely and keep writing my friend....xoxo
Comment from MizKat
SARAHICE - Your poem is absolutely amazing . . . so full of love for your friend, who reminds me so much of my mother. She must be thrilled that you wrote this about her. Kat
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SARAHICE - Your poem is absolutely amazing . . . so full of love for your friend, who reminds me so much of my mother. She must be thrilled that you wrote this about her. Kat
Comment Written 28-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
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Thank you for you'r kind reply, and I am so glad it inspired your heart and reminded you of you'r loving mother.
Comment from Charlene0513
To sarahice,
A wonderful poem to build your faith in God and that you, yourself will aspire to become more of who you are through the angel that you call a friend that shows you love thru all hard times.
Charlene
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To sarahice,
A wonderful poem to build your faith in God and that you, yourself will aspire to become more of who you are through the angel that you call a friend that shows you love thru all hard times.
Charlene
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2009
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Thank you for you'r beautiful review of my poem. And yes it is built by faith in God strengthened by a presence of an angel. Love Sarah
