Woodland Secrets Part One
a fantasy ottava rima - see author's notes91 total reviews
Comment from rama devi
Surely a blessing to be an uninvited guest at such strange ceremonies
Nice alliteration, especially
gladsome grace,
Well phrased, as always (hey, that rhymes...)
NO nits. Finely presented.
Another fairy-laced gem.
Warmly,
rd
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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Surely a blessing to be an uninvited guest at such strange ceremonies
Nice alliteration, especially
gladsome grace,
Well phrased, as always (hey, that rhymes...)
NO nits. Finely presented.
Another fairy-laced gem.
Warmly,
rd
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2009
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thank you, rama devi - I hope you enjoy the next section as well :-) Brooke
