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Fortune Teller

what deep gaze reveals ...

19 total reviews 
Comment from skye
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I wish I had a crystal ball.... then I could buy stock at the right price, and be there when my love arrives... LOL
I think these structured poems are often more difficult to write.
Yours is wonderful. You have followed the rules, made it easy to read, and very interesting.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
    Finding the right crystal ball would be fun. If I find a good one, I'll let you know so you can be rich, and happily united with your true love ...;)
    Glad you enjoyed this nonet. Appreciate your review...;)
Comment from sgalletti
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Hi. I am really enjoying reading these nonet entries before voting. Your syllable count is spot on and your have written a worthy entry. Best of luck in the contest! So, I want to know - what does the crystal ball reveal? I already know each day will bring joy! This was a very fun read....Sue

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
    Yes..there's a lot of fun entries in this contest. Glad you enjoyed this nonet. Today's crystal ball reveals that you will come into a large fortune unexpectedly, and a stranger will bring you good news regarding a loved one, a cat, and a new recipe that you will love.
    Appreciate your review ... ;) Art
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
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I enjoyed reading your poem for this particular contest, my friend. You did a wonderful job in crafting this. I found no errors to note. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
    Thanks, El Gato. Glad you enjoyed this nonet. Appreciate all your commments ...;)
Comment from jclark
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Well done. I really like your topic choice because I believe in psychics and am intrigued by tarot card readers, etc. Picture choice adds to your creative words. You met all the nonet criteria perfectly. Good luck!
Judy

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
    Thanks, Judy. Glad you enjoyed this nonet. I used to date a professional psychic and tarot card reader..lol. I also believe in psychics, and have been amazed by their talents. Appreciate your review ... ;0) Art
Comment from Helvi2
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Hi Star,
As soon as I saw the title of your poem I had to check it out. I love the visions in your crystal ball. You painted a very nice picture of the mystery that surrounds it. The revelation that wants to be revealed that's hoping to be set free. This is a Great Nonet that fits perfectly into the season.

Good Luck in the Contest,
Helvi :o)

Good Luck in the Contest,
Helvi :o)

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
    Thanks, Helvi.
    Glad you enjoyed this crysal ball nonet. Crystal balls have always fascinated me. This is the season, ... between now and Halloween. I may get a crystal ball reading at our Rennaissance Festival.
    Appreciate your review... ;) Star
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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An interesting subject for this nonet poem. It captures the mystical teasing of the fortune teller, hoping to tempt you into paying for more of her secret information. Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
    Thanks, Jeanie. The mystique surrounding psychics and fortune tellers has always fascinated me. Appreciate your review ... ;)Art
Comment from c_lucas
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This is a very well written poem as the mystique of Crystal Ball Glazing. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
    Thanks, Charlie. Glad you liked this nonet about fortune telling with a crystal ball.
    Appreciate your review ... ;) Art
reply by c_lucas on 28-Sep-2009
    You're welcome, Art. Charlie
Comment from midnight_dreamer
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the fortune teller was a very good poem... I like how you say magic revealed , lips are sealed,,,,, definitely a charming little nonet


job well done

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
    Thanks, m_d. Glad you enjoyed this nonet. Appreciate your review ... ;)sk
Comment from adewpearl
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Art, your poem is in perfect nonet form and is quite lovely - I really like the feeling of well being that permeates it :-) Good luck in the contest. Brooke

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
    Thanks, Brooke. Glad you enjoyed this nonet and the feelings it conjured up. Appreciate your review ...;0) Art
Comment from missy98writer
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You did a very cleaver nonet poem. Its hard to do restricted poetry. I did one too about word inflections. I give you 5 of 5 stars. The art work of a crystal ball was great.
Peace out. . . Nichole McKnight AKA Melissa.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2009


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
    Glad you enjoyed this nonet, Melissa. This form is a real challenge, as you know. Appreciate your review and rating ... ;0) Art