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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "if you can find it...."keep your hope alive....
7 total reviews
Comment from Blue Danube
shelley kaye:
This is cute.
You wrote almost nothing yet told a lot through this posting.
Don't know if you intended for it to be as such, but I like the asterisk's decreasing tone; from darker to lighter as if whipering themselves away.
Blue
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2009
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shelley kaye:
This is cute.
You wrote almost nothing yet told a lot through this posting.
Don't know if you intended for it to be as such, but I like the asterisk's decreasing tone; from darker to lighter as if whipering themselves away.
Blue
Comment Written 10-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2009
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hehe cool! thanx so much! :)
Comment from babylonia
shelley,
LOL the secret is the cat ate your tongue for the second time. :P
well, it was a thought. :P
nicely done.
made me smile and giggle. good luck~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2009
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shelley,
LOL the secret is the cat ate your tongue for the second time. :P
well, it was a thought. :P
nicely done.
made me smile and giggle. good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 10-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2009
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LOL! thanx! :)
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you are welcome~
Comment from mmichelle97219
You are a freakin' tease, shell. :-P I thought this was a bit too short but very clever for the contest.
Good luck in the voting booth
michelle
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2009
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You are a freakin' tease, shell. :-P I thought this was a bit too short but very clever for the contest.
Good luck in the voting booth
michelle
Comment Written 09-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2009
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hehehe ;-)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Okay shelley,
you keep you secrets under your 'innocent sarcastic grin'
a very silent unique thought
Good luck
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2009
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Okay shelley,
you keep you secrets under your 'innocent sarcastic grin'
a very silent unique thought
Good luck
Gert
Comment Written 09-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2009
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lol thankya! :)
Comment from Sasha
You lost me on this one but you sure peaked my interest. Delightful, but disappointing. Are you ever going to tell us your secret? Well done. You have certainly provided a great cliffhanger here.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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You lost me on this one but you sure peaked my interest. Delightful, but disappointing. Are you ever going to tell us your secret? Well done. You have certainly provided a great cliffhanger here.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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ya gotta highlight it and you can read it hehe :)
Comment from BJsView
Oh how clever! "If you really want to know read between the words that flow" This was very well done with the title and writing prompt. You are just too cool for words.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Oh how clever! "If you really want to know read between the words that flow" This was very well done with the title and writing prompt. You are just too cool for words.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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hehehe thanks so much! :)
Comment from Amicus
Fishing for stars
subconsciously,
such a naughty
thing to do.
'tis pretty cute,
my clever friend,
but six stars?
No can do.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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Fishing for stars
subconsciously,
such a naughty
thing to do.
'tis pretty cute,
my clever friend,
but six stars?
No can do.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2009
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LOL! thanx! :)
