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Dear Life

Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Dear Son"
Addressing different themes in a form of a letter

32 total reviews 
Comment from Shirley B
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I am truly sorry for your loss. The letter is beautiful. It is filled with a lot of emotion. It shows the inside thoughts of a mother to her son. Thank you for sharing your feelings. Shirley

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much, Shirley, for this very kind and heartfelt review.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from IndianaIrish
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Your heart must have been so sad to see your nephew's wedding and wish so much it was your son's. Your letter on his birthday is so moving and lovely, Pupa. I hope your memories of him have warmed your heart today.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
    Thanks Indy, your review is kind and heartfelt. I also appreciate your wish.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Begin Again
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Pupa

A wonderful letter you have written to your son. Moments of joy for others can often bring tears to our hearts...dreaming of how it might have been. We wish no harm to those who are happy, we only wish our children had been able to have the same.

My thoughts are with you. May your son and mine have met and they are smiling down on us.

Carol

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
    Carol, your review is heartfelt and I think we don't even need words, both of us!
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Amicus
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PUPA, you express your poignant loss and enduring love in these well crafted couplets with grace here. I am moved by the scenario you present--a still grieving mother imagining what will never be while attending her nephew's wedding--and
the sincere expression of love, this mother both depicts and offers up to her son who no longer lives.

Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
    Thanks, Amicus, for your heartfelt and insightful review. I really appreciate it.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Louise Michelle
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Oh, wow, what a poignant piece. It flowed beautifully and was executed nicely. What was great was that I did not feel depressed, I could feel the ongoing love through your words.
Lou

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
    Louise, I am so glad you said this, that it is not depressing, so a huge Thank YOu for that and also for your kind review.
    Love
    PupaJ
Comment from jlsavell
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PUPA,Your beautiful heart and wondrous love shine in this birthday tribute to your wonderful son. I can imagine the overwhelming feeling as you watched his cousin get married. Your poem has touched my heart as it will all Fanstorians and anyone else who has the priviledge of reading it. Warmest regards..jlsavell

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
    Jlsavell, your heartfelt review is most appreciated, thank you.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from nora arjuna
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dear pupa, your words touched me so. oh to look at someone who reminds you of your lost beloved. you're right to think of him as being free. it's us who's been imprisoned with memories. have a good day and bless you both.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
    Arjuna, thank you so much your for heartelt and kind review, and all those stars are for him on his birthday! Thank You so much.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Judian James
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Oh Pupa, Although I remember this tragedy from last year's post, it still brings me to tears as my pain for your loss is renewed. This is beautiful and comes from such a deep and loving place in your soul. excellent Pupa

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
    Judian, I am so touched that you still remember last year's, it means so much to me. Thank you for your loving heart.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from RebelRose
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This is a beautiful and heart-warming poem/letter. As the mother of a son myself I can relate to this. You have done a good job with this work.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
    Thanks for a heartfelt review and kind comments, RebelRose.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Jean Lutz
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You and your son are still united in spirit and the love lives on as you share your separation and love with other mothers, other sons. God bless you. He knows.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2009


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much Jean, your words mean so much to me.
    Love
    Pupa