Dear Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Dear Son"Addressing different themes in a form of a letter
32 total reviews
Comment from jeana
This is a devastating and sad theme. It truly broke my heart as a mother. My son is 18 and the thought of loosing him is more than I could even come close to imagining. I know the images and premonitions you have capotured within the lines. I am so sorry for your loss. jeana
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2009
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This is a devastating and sad theme. It truly broke my heart as a mother. My son is 18 and the thought of loosing him is more than I could even come close to imagining. I know the images and premonitions you have capotured within the lines. I am so sorry for your loss. jeana
Comment Written 25-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2009
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Thank you dear friend, your comments in this review are heartfelt. I appreciate your high rating, means a lot morally.
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Pupa
Comment from Siren_116
Oh no....I think my own heart stopped just now.
I am so very sorry. I can't even begin to imagine the pain your heart is in.
The message of you piece is all that matters here. The fact that it is beautifully written simply adds to it's beauty.
How very sad and tragic.
I am so very sorry for you friend.
Lorraine
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2009
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Oh no....I think my own heart stopped just now.
I am so very sorry. I can't even begin to imagine the pain your heart is in.
The message of you piece is all that matters here. The fact that it is beautifully written simply adds to it's beauty.
How very sad and tragic.
I am so very sorry for you friend.
Lorraine
Comment Written 18-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2009
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Dear Lorraine, you are very sensitive it seems, your words are heartfelt and I appreciate this review so much, thank you.
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Pupa
Comment from Mariea
A beautiful but heart breaking poem. I enjoyed.
Flow - fluid movement
Structure - well constructed and developed
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - nice easy flow.
Enjoy your day. Regards Mia
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2009
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A beautiful but heart breaking poem. I enjoyed.
Flow - fluid movement
Structure - well constructed and developed
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - nice easy flow.
Enjoy your day. Regards Mia
Comment Written 18-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2009
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Hi Mia,
Yes, heart breaking is the right expression. Thank you so much for your encouraging review.
Love
Pupa
Comment from fictionwriter
What a wonderful tribute to one you've loved and lost. I can't imagine the pain, but I know what I would have missed out on. Wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2009
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What a wonderful tribute to one you've loved and lost. I can't imagine the pain, but I know what I would have missed out on. Wonderful poem.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2009
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Thank you so much for your heartfelt comments, I appreciate your review very much.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Justin Chopin
I'm sorry that you're son died so young at 19. Great job with everything and I'm sure that your son would be happy that you did this poem. Amazing job.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2009
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I'm sorry that you're son died so young at 19. Great job with everything and I'm sure that your son would be happy that you did this poem. Amazing job.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2009
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Thanks bozroz, you always encourage me with your comments, this one is special.
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Pupa
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello PUPA
a very difficult letter/poem to read because of the memory of the passing of your son--
It is hard to make sense of a loss.
I am so sorry especially when it's you son's birthday.
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Hello PUPA
a very difficult letter/poem to read because of the memory of the passing of your son--
It is hard to make sense of a loss.
I am so sorry especially when it's you son's birthday.
Gert
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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No, we cannot make sense of so many things in this world, but maybe one day we shall, if we believe enough.
Thanks for your heartfelt review, Gert.
Love
Pupa
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You are welcome PUPA
Gert
Please take care.
Comment from Krugerrand
Very poignant and the letter style poem is unique. Great flow of memories, feelings and words.
Sincerest sympathies. It's a crime when parents outlive their children.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Very poignant and the letter style poem is unique. Great flow of memories, feelings and words.
Sincerest sympathies. It's a crime when parents outlive their children.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Thanks for your very kind and heartfelt comments. I appreciate it.
Love
Pupa
Comment from irishauthorme
I especially like your free-style, in that sense and in your expression. I felt that this was something from your life's story, and even if it wasn't, I still enjoyed the emotions brought forth by your words.
Your last line struck a deep note inside, life is indeed a prison of sorts, we are governed by forces we do not understand and limited by our physical being.
Thanks for an enjoyable read!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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I especially like your free-style, in that sense and in your expression. I felt that this was something from your life's story, and even if it wasn't, I still enjoyed the emotions brought forth by your words.
Your last line struck a deep note inside, life is indeed a prison of sorts, we are governed by forces we do not understand and limited by our physical being.
Thanks for an enjoyable read!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Thank you so muuch Iris, your very kind review is much appreciated. Unfortunately it is true,happened 13 years ago.
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Pupa
Comment from Joan E.
I am so sorry that the funeral triggered the sadness of your loss that occurred some time ago. Using the letter format is very creative and appropriate as a tribute, but also to communicate your everlasting feelings. Your last line is filled with pathos and very powerful.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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I am so sorry that the funeral triggered the sadness of your loss that occurred some time ago. Using the letter format is very creative and appropriate as a tribute, but also to communicate your everlasting feelings. Your last line is filled with pathos and very powerful.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Thanks Joan, your review is kind and heartfelt. It was not his funeral, that happened 13 years ago. It was his birthday.
Love
Pupa
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I appreciate the feedback and clarification. Thank you again for sharing your reflections. -Joan
Comment from joan marie
So sad to lose a child anyway. I have none and can only imagine how horrible this emotion is. I have lost three people this year. I try to remember we will all be together in Heaven someday. joan marie
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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So sad to lose a child anyway. I have none and can only imagine how horrible this emotion is. I have lost three people this year. I try to remember we will all be together in Heaven someday. joan marie
Comment Written 17-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2009
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Yes, I do believe that we shall meet one day. Thanks you so much Joan for your very kind review.
Love
Pupa
