Comment from Srinivasan

Excellent

I feel hungry looking at the sumptuous items in the picture and the detailed description in the poem. I feel a glossary of some of the words used in the poem will make it a bit more clear for the readers to understand it. All the best.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009

I really appreciate your very thoughtful words and kind review. Which words are not clear? I am so used to these items, I can cook them in my sleep. LOL

reply by Srinivasan on 06-Aug-2009

burritos& Ambrosia are the words that I mentioned. Even the expansion of B&B may help some of them who haven't come across the Acronym earlier.

Comment from Mariea

Excellent

Hello Skye. Great piece and you've addressed the writing prompt very well.

Rhyme - consistant throughout
Structure - well put together and developed
Flow - good easy flow throughout
Rhythm - Smooth movement throughout

Regards Mia

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009

I really appreciate your very thoughtful words and kind review. So glad you liked it.

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

Hmmm, you make my mouth water. I spent a night in a B & B once, and the breakfast is as yummy as you describe yours. Good luck with the glorious food ... I mean, the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009

Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review. They are fun and different places to stay, so individual and unique.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Skye

I spent fifteen years making breakfast, lunches and dinners for corporate functions so I simply loved your poem...especially the last two lines. No one knows how much a business owns you until they've done it. You have to really love what you are doing for ever to work. Wonderful job!

Carol

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009

Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review. I applaud your time spent in serving others these wonderful meals. You are so right... the job owns you. I did not realize how much I loved sleeping in until I could do it. LOL

Comment from jester71

Excellent

I'm a foodie through and through so I really enjoy your poem. My husband says I read Gourmet Magazine the way men read the Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Edition. They tease me at work because I make homemade crackers but they are so easy and delicious I don't see why not.
Cute poem! I am reading The Wednesday Letters and it takes place at a B&B. Have you read it? It's great. Your description of rainbow juices and biscuits with jam has made me hungry.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2009

Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review. I haven't read it yet, but plan on it soon... sounds just like something I would love. Go eat and have jam with that soda cracker. LOL

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I love breakfast and you have made me hungry. A great poem about food in all its glory. You appealed to the senses and
one can smell and taste the marvelous breakfast.

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 Comment Written 04-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2009

Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review. Now, put those breakfast casseroles into the fridge tonight so you can eat hearty tomorrow. LOL