Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

if they have an affect on one student should be effect
had a profound affect on me should be effect
a classmate's untimely death add the apostrophe
Carol, I have no idea how you had the presence to write such a gorgeous, well-composed, thoughtful, detailed eulogy only days after your grandson's death - this is utterly beautiful.
I can only imagine the impact this had on everyone present at his funeral. The way you place yourself in everyone else's shoes before you describe your own response is just stunning.
again, I am so sorry for your loss. This has affected me profoundly. Brooke

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2009

Brooke...Your thoughtful words have me crying, but I can't tell you how much they mean to me. He was a wonderful child and I thank God for the short time we had him. Thank you again. Carol

I'll fix my error asap...as soon as I can see. Thanks!