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Comment from Tramore
So devestatingly sad and so beautifully written. My heart ached as I read this especially because I recently lost a beloved adult daughter. I could feel your pain as well as mine in your words.
May you be blessed.
Tramore
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2009
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So devestatingly sad and so beautifully written. My heart ached as I read this especially because I recently lost a beloved adult daughter. I could feel your pain as well as mine in your words.
May you be blessed.
Tramore
Comment Written 20-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2009
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Tramore
It will be one year on September 1st and some days it feels like yesterday. Thanks you for reading my story. It means a lot to me. I also lost my 4 yr old son. Hopefully your daughter, my son and grandson are smiling down on us.
Thanks again CArol
Comment from PUPA
My dear friend,
How many times did you 'Begin Again', I read through your profile, then chose this story, out of all, to read! I will just tell you that my son drowned too!! A long story, I was about to write it today, but just couldn't.
I felt you were describing me during that horrifying day. I went through all the stages, the waiting, my God, the little hope that someone had found him, maybe memory loss.
I will make it short and tell you that I share with you all those feelings which we have to live with and accept.
Needless to say how touched I was, tears running down my cheeks. And by the way, the date you wrote this, is the date when my husband passed away, two and a half years before my son.
Love and Blessings.
Pupa
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2009
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My dear friend,
How many times did you 'Begin Again', I read through your profile, then chose this story, out of all, to read! I will just tell you that my son drowned too!! A long story, I was about to write it today, but just couldn't.
I felt you were describing me during that horrifying day. I went through all the stages, the waiting, my God, the little hope that someone had found him, maybe memory loss.
I will make it short and tell you that I share with you all those feelings which we have to live with and accept.
Needless to say how touched I was, tears running down my cheeks. And by the way, the date you wrote this, is the date when my husband passed away, two and a half years before my son.
Love and Blessings.
Pupa
Comment Written 16-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2009
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Pupa WE must be soul friends...if their such a thing...if not I just made us one...My son died in a water accident when he was four and my grandson died last Labor Day when he was 17. There is no getting over it, is there? We learn to live with it...but we will never forget. My thoughts and prayers will be with you always. Feel free to write me whenever...we sometimes just need someone who understands. That's touching that our lives are similar and I wrote a story that connects with your husband's death. Thank you for sharing with me.
Always a friend, Carol
Comment from Joyce L.
This writing is outstanding and with no doubt is the reason you won the contest. What a sad experience to have had to go through....again, but the way you were able to tell your story is remarkable. Joyce
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2009
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This writing is outstanding and with no doubt is the reason you won the contest. What a sad experience to have had to go through....again, but the way you were able to tell your story is remarkable. Joyce
Comment Written 26-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2009
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Joyce Thank you for your thoughtful and understanding words. I greatly appreciate it. Carol
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very heartbreaking story. I remember the beautiful tribute you wrote for his service. It is hard to believe this could happen to one family twice. It is good that you have a strong faith. At times like that it is the faith that carries you when on your own you couldn't make it. This is beautifully written. No wonder you won the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2009
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This is a very heartbreaking story. I remember the beautiful tribute you wrote for his service. It is hard to believe this could happen to one family twice. It is good that you have a strong faith. At times like that it is the faith that carries you when on your own you couldn't make it. This is beautifully written. No wonder you won the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2009
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Beth...Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words. Without my faith in God and my family, I can't imagine how I would have endured the pain. Friendships on this site have definitely eased my pain and I can't thank everyone enough.
Thank you again - Carol
Comment from Annmuma
No secret why this entry won! Excellent job. Writing is always cathartic. thanks for sharing this sad, sad story and letting us be a part of your remembering. ann
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2009
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No secret why this entry won! Excellent job. Writing is always cathartic. thanks for sharing this sad, sad story and letting us be a part of your remembering. ann
Comment Written 20-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2009
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Ann Everyone has been so helpful and gracious with their thoughts, I can not thank you and everyone else enough. Though I cried with every word, it was good to get it out of my system. Thank you again. I greatly appreciate lyour review and the stars. Carol
Comment from Zaphod
Excellent piece. I really wasn't surprised to see that this had won. Congratulations on the win, and condolences on your loss.
All the best,
Z
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2009
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Excellent piece. I really wasn't surprised to see that this had won. Congratulations on the win, and condolences on your loss.
All the best,
Z
Comment Written 20-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2009
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Zaphod...
Thank you for your kind words. I truly appreciate it. Some days are worse than others, but we move forward. Thanks again Carol
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
How very sad, and what a dreadful loss. My heart really does go out to you and your family. The loss of loved ones, especially children leaves a very big space in our lives which even time has trouble healing. Your writing reflects very clearly the sence of loss your family still feels, as you seek to come to terms with events.
I trust you will take a little comfort from the fact that this story will touch many hearts.
Juliette
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2009
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How very sad, and what a dreadful loss. My heart really does go out to you and your family. The loss of loved ones, especially children leaves a very big space in our lives which even time has trouble healing. Your writing reflects very clearly the sence of loss your family still feels, as you seek to come to terms with events.
I trust you will take a little comfort from the fact that this story will touch many hearts.
Juliette
Comment Written 20-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2009
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Juliette
Thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments. It was extremely difficult to put the story on paper but the kindness I have received in return is unbelievable and a healing potion by itself. Thank you so much. Carol
Comment from Leonidus07
A very emotional and well done story. This story almost made me cry. I'm sorry for your loss. The story itself had no errors in spelling or grammar, and it was very emotional. ~Leonidus
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2009
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A very emotional and well done story. This story almost made me cry. I'm sorry for your loss. The story itself had no errors in spelling or grammar, and it was very emotional. ~Leonidus
Comment Written 20-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2009
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Leon
Thank you for your kind and generous review. I appreciate it very much. Carol
Comment from Rain Chapman
I have never had to deal with this particular loss and the thought of it scares me to death. Your story has brought tears to my eyes and is an awesome testament to your love of DJ. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2009
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I have never had to deal with this particular loss and the thought of it scares me to death. Your story has brought tears to my eyes and is an awesome testament to your love of DJ. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2009
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Lorraine...Thank you so much for your kind words. I cried the entire time I tried to write this, but it has been worth it from all the kindness I have received from other writers like yourself. Thank you so much. Carol
Comment from Joan E.
The evocative title and picture set the mood well for your retelling of this horrific remembering. I am so very sorry that you experienced two accidental drownings in your family and a tragic recovery on your birthday. It has been less than a year, and I applaud your courage to share this story and convey to others the power of love and faith in overcoming great loss. Your story is compellingly told from the start to your powerful conclusion.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2009
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The evocative title and picture set the mood well for your retelling of this horrific remembering. I am so very sorry that you experienced two accidental drownings in your family and a tragic recovery on your birthday. It has been less than a year, and I applaud your courage to share this story and convey to others the power of love and faith in overcoming great loss. Your story is compellingly told from the start to your powerful conclusion.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2009
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Joan I appreciate your thoughtful and generous words. I cried the entire time that I wrote it but the response from everyone has had a powerful healing effect. Kindness can go a long way. I am very thankful. Carol
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Thank you for your gracious response. The healing process is long, and I am glad that the kindness of the FanStorians is helpful. Hugs- Joan
