Comment from Pacinogal

Excellent

BRAVO!!!!! Larry this is so perfect!

My favorite part is: "And I want you to always know
I'll always be there for you
that you will never face alone
any problems that you do."

That is so comforting and peaceful. Excellent post.
Kathy

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009

Thank you so much I am glad that you enjoyed it. Be good
Larry

reply by Pacinogal on 17-Jun-2009

Yoou're welcome Larry.
Kindly,
Kathy
P.S. I loved the title of this one. :)

reply by Pacinogal on 17-Jun-2009

Yoou're welcome Larry.
Kindly,
Kathy
P.S. I loved the title of this one. :)

Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

A touching poem which whispers of the love between man and woman. I loved the words and the flow. You presented this well. A truly romantic touch.
Best regards jada

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009

Thank you so much for your kind words it means alot.
Larry

Comment from luisestable

Good

A not so heavy poem about true love. I like the rhyme exposed here and the simplicity of the words used.
Very easy poem to read. Nothing is too fancy or even a little complicated. Everything is cler and taken at first reading. I enjoyed best stanza one and the last stanza. They open and close the poem quite well.
luis

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009

I am so glad you like it Thank you so much for the review. Take care.
Larry

Comment from mahejabeen/ nidhi

Excellent

A person should learn how to express love from you. It is about how a person feels when in love. And in one word it is just beautiful!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2009

Thank you so much for your very kind review. I will take that as a compliment about expressing love from me. I love to write romantic poetry, and have wrote a good dela of it over the years, most of it gone now. But there are other poems in my portfolio if you care to read them, thank you so much. Take care.
Larry