Romantic Moments
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Lost Within Your Beauty"Poems of Love and Romance
4 total reviews
Comment from Pacinogal
Hi Larry,
This is a great romance poem.
I enjoyed it very much.
Excellent post. Great pic.
Kindly, Kathy
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2009
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Hi Larry,
This is a great romance poem.
I enjoyed it very much.
Excellent post. Great pic.
Kindly, Kathy
Comment Written 15-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2009
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Thank you again I am so glad you liked it, been getting very good reviews on both of them, take care.
Larry
Great Larry that you've been getting great reviews on both of them.
I'm so happy for you.
Kathy
Comment from Nicnac
This is a lovely sensuous poem, Larry.
Being lost in love - sailing higher - dreams come true and passions fire! Whew! Spectacular.
You've expressed your feelings of love so openly.
The poem flows smoothly and has nice presentation.
Two suggestions:
its our hearts - it's
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I think you worded your notes wrong at the end. tee hee...
They state - being apart from the one you love the most is a great place to be. ;) I think you meant Being WITH.
Lovely writing. :)
Nic
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2009
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This is a lovely sensuous poem, Larry.
Being lost in love - sailing higher - dreams come true and passions fire! Whew! Spectacular.
You've expressed your feelings of love so openly.
The poem flows smoothly and has nice presentation.
Two suggestions:
its our hearts - it's
and
I think you worded your notes wrong at the end. tee hee...
They state - being apart from the one you love the most is a great place to be. ;) I think you meant Being WITH.
Lovely writing. :)
Nic
Comment Written 14-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2009
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Thank you for your kind words and comments. I changed the its, to it's and I speperated the "apart" to "a part" you know to be a part of something you love, not apart as in away from them. I belive that will work now. Take care
Larry
Comment from jgaman
Very romantic writing. It is comes off very sensual and not corny at all.
This is pretty much what every woman wants to hear. Therefore it should be published for them to read. Not every woman has a man that can write. So when a man can write he should share it.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2009
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Very romantic writing. It is comes off very sensual and not corny at all.
This is pretty much what every woman wants to hear. Therefore it should be published for them to read. Not every woman has a man that can write. So when a man can write he should share it.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2009
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Thank you for your kind words, I do try and share all that I write, I have many other poems posted alot of them romantic. Feel free to search my portfolio if you desire. Thank you
Larry
Comment from lgrove
Hello and good evening larry5000. I thought this was truly a beautiful romantic poem you have written. I know your wife must love it. Have a nice evening take care and God Bless.
Lisa
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2009
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Hello and good evening larry5000. I thought this was truly a beautiful romantic poem you have written. I know your wife must love it. Have a nice evening take care and God Bless.
Lisa
Comment Written 14-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2009
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Thank you so much I am glad that you enjoyed it. If you like romantic poems I have others in my portfolio if you care to check them out. Take care.
Larry
