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Insignificant No More

A conversation with Jesus

72 total reviews 
Comment from amada
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This story touch with me because I have been ignored many times and I just let it go because I know God sees me and loves me. It's important to be reminded that humility is also a blessing.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much for reviewing my work. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    Hugs,
    Janilou
Comment from Belinda
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

It amazes me how you can have such an imaginative inspiration. The result is an interesting story that appeals to many readers and reviewers. You deserve a six, at least from me... :>

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much, Belinda! You made my night.
    Hugs,
    Jani
Comment from tati
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Dear friend,

This is an amazing story with attractive spiritual message. "Tell my daughter she is not insignificant in my eyes. She is my beloved child and I love her very much. If she'd been the only soul on earth in need of salvation, I would have gone to the cross to save her alone. Tell my son I love him more than he will ever comprehend, and no matter how alone he feels at times, all he needs to do is call My name."

For me personally this beautifully inspired story has brought love and hope. I enjoyed reading this very much. Thank you for sharing. Warm wishes, tati (June 16, 2009)



 Comment Written 15-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2009
    Thank you so much for reviewing my work. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I am honored to read your words, written on my birthday. :-)
    Hugs,
    Janilou
reply by tati on 06-Aug-2009
    You're welcome, Janilou. I will read right away your flash fiction The Quaffel Feather ... Regards, tati.
reply by tati on 06-Aug-2009
    You're welcome, Janilou. I will read right away your flash fiction The Quaffel Feather ... Regards, tati.
reply by tati on 06-Aug-2009
    You're welcome, Janilou. I will read right away your flash fiction The Quaffel Feather ... Regards, tati.
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

this is beautiful, janilou, and very well written. i cannot find a thing to pick about in message or formatting and grammar. great job.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2009
    Bless your heart. I deeply appreciate this stunning rating and review.
    Jani
Comment from mermaids
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This is a great piece of writing for teaching and inspiration. It would be good to start the day as a reminder that Jesus walks with us. I like the scene with Jesus talking to the swallow, emphasizes that all of God's creation is important.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2009
    Thanks for the great review. :-)
    Jani
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Milking goats took forever some days, or so it seemed. The whooshing sound of the milking machines and pump, combined with the i-pod(I-Pod? I'm not sure myself. Not a big deal but it IS noticable. :0) )

He smiled and touched my cheek. "I didn't arrive(I wanted to put quotes - for emphasis - around "arrive".)

The only reason this didn't reach them is if they didn't read it. It's beautiful, Jani. Thank you.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2009
    You just officially made my night. Thank you so much for the review and the six stars. Wow. Thank you!
    I checked - it is i-Pod, little i, big P. I'll correct that and add quotes, if you think it would look better. :-)
    Bless your heart.
    Hugs,
    Jani
Comment from fictionwriter
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What a great little story. I know that he's there even if we are too lost in our grief to see. I know that he loves us all. What a wonderful story. Well done.l

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2009
    Thanks for the great review. :-)
    Jani
Comment from Live2Write
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Thank you so much for this. Your faith is a light in the world and truly beautiful. While I don't share your exact spiritual views, I always feel a Higher Power with me and to me the most beautiful is the messages that Higher Power speaks through us all, in all our languages and voices. The goodness of your heart speaks through your writing. I admire you.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2009
    Thanks for the great review. :-) Your kind words really lifted me up tonight.
    Jani
Comment from anabelle
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What an amazing story this is. You writing is beautiful, your message is astounding, and your presence behind the words intensifies the other three. I no longer feel insignificant either now. At least for this moment.

Thank you. Regards, anabelle

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2009
    Thanks for the great review. :-) Bless your heart for all those kind words.
    Hugs,
    Jani
Comment from Judian James
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"Jesus followed my daughter's favorite goat, Brownie, out of the milking parlor into the barn. He paused to speak to a nesting barn swallow and I wondered what He was saying to her. What could a swallow possibly have to worry about? Her eggs? Her fledglings?" lovely Jani!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2009
    Thanks for the great review. :-)
    Jani