Comment from BookDaisy

Excellent

A beautiful portrait of the journey of faith, from childhood to adulthood. Thank God for seeds planted early. I also loved the picture you used. Thanks!

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009

Thanks for such an encouraging review, most appreciated.
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Pupa

Comment from AnnieBogart

Excellent

This is a very beautifully well constructed poem. It flows effortlessly. The font is a bit hard to read at times, but that is most likely my own eyes...I've been editing all morning and they burn!
Good job!

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009

Burning eyes! I know how that feels! Thanks Annie for such an encouraging review.
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Pupa

Comment from RaymondJohn

Excellent

The analogy with husbanding a plant is excellent. I like the images, they are so appropriate after what seems to have been an interminable winter. Best of luck in the contest. You should have a strong entry. Ray.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009

A very encouraging review Ray, I appreciate it very much. Thanks!
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Pupa

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello PUPA liked how you started out telling us in your rhyming story/poem of how you found faith and love the lines about the devil.

sounds like you ,indeed have faith.

I like your 12 syllable count ( I believe 12 syllables is Hexameter .
Gert

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009

Thanks for telling me the word Hexameter, Gert, I did not know that. Glad you liked my faith poem/letter.
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Pupa

reply by Gert sherwood on 02-Jun-2009

PUPA you are so welcome
Gert

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Firstly, I am happy to see you
again writing with regularity.
Your writing in this poem of
faith rings with sincerity,
with a warmness of spirit that
one can feel in your soft words
as they wind their way down the
page, each word kissing the soul
of anyone who stops to read your
poem of faith.
Well done

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009

Thanks fastdigits, glad you liked my faith poem/letter.
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Pupa

Comment from nora arjuna

Excellent

hi pupa. as always you're so great at expressing yourself and this is a strong faith contest entry. i enjoyed reading about your spiritual journey. good luck!


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 Comment Written 02-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009

Thanks Arjuna, appreciate your review.
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Pupa