Dear Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Dear Faith"Addressing different themes in a form of a letter
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Comment from jshep
I absolutely love this done in letter form. It would be a lovely way to put into memoirs. You address faith so clearly as to when it wavered and took a back seat to where is was there waiting for your return. A true friend it is. Beautiful flow and sentiments in this poem, Pupa. Joyce
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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I absolutely love this done in letter form. It would be a lovely way to put into memoirs. You address faith so clearly as to when it wavered and took a back seat to where is was there waiting for your return. A true friend it is. Beautiful flow and sentiments in this poem, Pupa. Joyce
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Thanks Joyce, I appreciate all your comments in this review.
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Pupa
Comment from Begin Again
I am pleased that your poem (letter) shows that faith lives inside of people, even those that don't dwell inside the cement buildings called "the house of the lord" It is wonderful to attend services there, but we shouldn't believe that only those who do have faith.
I am glad that faith helped you to fight your battles and that you found greater riches on the other side.
Beautiful picture and beautiful, heartfelt poem.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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I am pleased that your poem (letter) shows that faith lives inside of people, even those that don't dwell inside the cement buildings called "the house of the lord" It is wonderful to attend services there, but we shouldn't believe that only those who do have faith.
I am glad that faith helped you to fight your battles and that you found greater riches on the other side.
Beautiful picture and beautiful, heartfelt poem.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Thank you for your encouraging comments in this review. I appreciate it very much.
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Pupa
Comment from adewpearl
Pupa, I like your faith poem in letter form and in solid rhyming couplets - and yes, attending church is all many think one has to do - and some even continue thinking that past the time they are school girls. contentment, gratitude, patience - all good companions to faith. This is touching and thoughtful, dear friend. Brooke
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Pupa, I like your faith poem in letter form and in solid rhyming couplets - and yes, attending church is all many think one has to do - and some even continue thinking that past the time they are school girls. contentment, gratitude, patience - all good companions to faith. This is touching and thoughtful, dear friend. Brooke
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Thanks Brooke, your review is most appreciated.
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Comment from filmoreodragon
Pretty and heartfelt poem. I love the letter format. What a great idea to personify and address faith in gratitude. We all have to fight our demons. I'm lad you won.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Pretty and heartfelt poem. I love the letter format. What a great idea to personify and address faith in gratitude. We all have to fight our demons. I'm lad you won.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Thanks for a lovely review, I really appreciate it.
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Pupa
Comment from Mike K2
I enjoyed this poem and actually faith is important and I love what you say about it in this well written chapter. In trying to deal with other people, there are a few stanzas that had important notes and reminders. I am doing an ongoing work where other people would greatly expand my material, but my first commitment is towards myself and continue on, even if the people that I write about don't value the work enough to respond.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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I enjoyed this poem and actually faith is important and I love what you say about it in this well written chapter. In trying to deal with other people, there are a few stanzas that had important notes and reminders. I am doing an ongoing work where other people would greatly expand my material, but my first commitment is towards myself and continue on, even if the people that I write about don't value the work enough to respond.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Thanks Mike, your comments are always appreciated.
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Pupa
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Pupa, that is very inspiring and beautiful as well. I loved your art selection and hope you poem does well in the contrst. Loyd
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Pupa, that is very inspiring and beautiful as well. I loved your art selection and hope you poem does well in the contrst. Loyd
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Thanks Loyd, your comments are most appreciated.
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Pupa
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You are welcome. Loyd
Comment from findingmyroom
This is a lovely testament to the struggle for grace. I like you presentation very much, the letter format and the artwork both. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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This is a lovely testament to the struggle for grace. I like you presentation very much, the letter format and the artwork both. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Thanks so much for your encouragement.
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Pupa
Comment from valtrip
This is an amazing poem! You really captured the true essence of faith. Your descriptive use of language as well as the sincerity of your thoughts makes this one of the most remarkable poems I have ever read.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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This is an amazing poem! You really captured the true essence of faith. Your descriptive use of language as well as the sincerity of your thoughts makes this one of the most remarkable poems I have ever read.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Wow, this is a most encouraging review, thank you so much for your appreciation of my poem and for the lovely shining stars.
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Pupa
Comment from Allmine
I like it and how you show that faith is an innermost thing and not something you gain from going to church every Sunday. This line "when I did, you hurried that combat to its start" seems very awkward to me. Maybe to instead of that? I dunno. Good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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I like it and how you show that faith is an innermost thing and not something you gain from going to church every Sunday. This line "when I did, you hurried that combat to its start" seems very awkward to me. Maybe to instead of that? I dunno. Good luck in the contest
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Thanks for your encouraging comments. Will see about that line.
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Pupa
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Lemme know if you fix and I'll reread and rerate
Comment from Justin Chopin
Great and very well written poem about your faith. Loved reading every line of it and thought that it was a good evolution of how you grew in your spiritual. If I sound like a moron and if this is totally wrong please tell me. Anyway the poem was amazing.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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Great and very well written poem about your faith. Loved reading every line of it and thought that it was a good evolution of how you grew in your spiritual. If I sound like a moron and if this is totally wrong please tell me. Anyway the poem was amazing.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2009
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You got it right Friend, and thanks for your lovely comments.
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Pupa
