Romantic Moments
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "To Everything I Dream"Poems of Love and Romance
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Comment from filmoreodragon
I like your author's notes as much as the entire poem. It is so true. You are blessed to have such a relationship. And you are smart to know how blessed you are.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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I like your author's notes as much as the entire poem. It is so true. You are blessed to have such a relationship. And you are smart to know how blessed you are.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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Thank you so much for your great words I am so glad you like the poem and the author notes as well, take care.
Larry
Comment from Pacinogal
Excellent post Larry.
I'm a romantic so how could I not love
this poem? I also loved the picture, mmmmm.
I loved all the stanzas, I can't pick out
just one. Kindly, Kathy
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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Excellent post Larry.
I'm a romantic so how could I not love
this poem? I also loved the picture, mmmmm.
I loved all the stanzas, I can't pick out
just one. Kindly, Kathy
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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I know that you are a romantic and I am glad this touched you so. I just received a review on this one a moment ago that was likew really wow, a couple words spelled wrong or mixed up but it was a heck of a review I will send it to you in a seperate box. Take care.
Larry
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ok Larry, ever notice how all the poets make spelling mistakes on their answers and PM's?????? It's funny. Kathy LOL
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Yea all of us poets are to busy being romantic we forget how to spell straight. LOL
HA HA HA HA When do you sleep?
Comment from Jo_Tweedy
I am not usually for love poems I find them too pathetic yours has changed my mind all together. Yours was beautiful and I found it artist. It flowed well and was very easy to read with out thinking "oh, god it's enough now" in fact I wish it was longer so I read a few times.
You chose a perfect picture to reflect your poem and it made the lay out all the more attrative to look at.
I think no changes need to be made nothing needs to be re thought. Every line was perfection and I am glad to have read it.
Now if we can all believe men like this in your poem really exist and try to find them all the woman's dreams will be answered.
Good luck and keep writing
Jo :-)
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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I am not usually for love poems I find them too pathetic yours has changed my mind all together. Yours was beautiful and I found it artist. It flowed well and was very easy to read with out thinking "oh, god it's enough now" in fact I wish it was longer so I read a few times.
You chose a perfect picture to reflect your poem and it made the lay out all the more attrative to look at.
I think no changes need to be made nothing needs to be re thought. Every line was perfection and I am glad to have read it.
Now if we can all believe men like this in your poem really exist and try to find them all the woman's dreams will be answered.
Good luck and keep writing
Jo :-)
Comment Written 02-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2009
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Wow thanks, it is not often I can change a person's mind with my poetry, but I am so glad you enjoyed it that much.
I have many poems up here some romantic, some spiritual, some of just friendship and other general poems as well.
if you care to read my portfolio, please do.
I have only been up here on fanstory for a little over a month, but have had many great reviews of my poetry both spiritual and romantic, and have made a few fans along the way.
It makes me feel good when I have touched someone's heart or mind, again I thank you for the very kind words, take care.
Larry
